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  • evilsweetbabii

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    Pleaseeeee update!! This story is amazing! Mr. Green
    April 23rd, 2013 at 12:45pm
  • PunkStealer

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    Update soon!(:
    April 4th, 2013 at 12:18pm
  • MissyAmber95

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    Love this story!
    Please update soon!
    October 15th, 2012 at 02:52am
  • XxguttabitchxX

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    love it more plzz
    November 13th, 2011 at 04:12pm
  • XxAlenaxX

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    Best story I've read so far. You're a great writer, and I urge you to keep going, excellent work. Oh, and I also JUST WANT MORE!! Update? Pwease? :3
    August 16th, 2011 at 04:09pm
  • bItTeRsWeEtNeSs

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    i can kinda see where Ashen is coming from, but still, she was a bit harsh :\
    MORE SOON
    August 6th, 2011 at 08:00pm
  • Billy Michealangelo

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    Looooved chapter 10. Can I get 11 soon?
    August 6th, 2011 at 05:41pm
  • ZombieToast

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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
    August 6th, 2011 at 04:05am
  • Felicia_Selina

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    Love it <3
    August 5th, 2011 at 04:21pm
  • majoji

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    Poor Billy! I really feel sorry for him! Now I think Ashen is being a bitch! Can't she see that Billy actually cares for her and doesn't lie to her?
    I've been longing for an update, and it's finally here :D yay!
    August 5th, 2011 at 03:25pm
  • XylonYuuka

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    Omg! :( that last bit was really sad. Im with Cameloparadis on this. Big hugs for Billy!! ^^
    Update as soon as you can please :D
    August 4th, 2011 at 08:23pm
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    Awesome chapter update soon ; p
    August 4th, 2011 at 07:01pm
  • temptation;

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    Ashen is making my blood boil. She's being really stupid, bleh. ^o^
    AND I'm with Cameloparadis, I think Billy deserves a hug.
    August 4th, 2011 at 08:44am
  • MalfoyFangirl

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    Cameloparadis :
    I totally agree :)
    August 4th, 2011 at 08:35am
  • MalfoyFangirl

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    I really like it <3 :)
    August 4th, 2011 at 08:35am
  • Wanderlust.

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    Okay how can she not believe him? Like even if she did think he was joking around he has the bruises!! Ugh how can she just...not...like just not even think it over?
    I wanna give Billy a hug
    August 4th, 2011 at 07:50am
  • Sleepy-San

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    Wow, that actually made me kind of sad. :(
    August 4th, 2011 at 06:49am
  • Sleepy-San

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    SO INTENSE. :O
    July 27th, 2011 at 08:27am
  • like twenty below

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    aaaaaaaaaaaah, my god.
    July 26th, 2011 at 09:06am
  • SoccergirlBianca

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    yes an update
    July 26th, 2011 at 12:28am
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