July 9th, 2011 at 10:51pm
Untouchable - Comments
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OMG!!!! Update soon plz!!!!!July 9th, 2011 at 08:19pm
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OMG!!!! Update soon plz!!!!!July 9th, 2011 at 08:18pm
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..........Oh shit! Please update soon! I'm dying to know how she's gonna react <3July 9th, 2011 at 01:51pm
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AwwwwwwwwwwwwJuly 9th, 2011 at 12:09pm
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♥♥♥♥♥♥ No words, really-except Beautiful.:)July 9th, 2011 at 08:59am
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♥♥♥♥♥♥ No words, really-except Beautiful.:)July 9th, 2011 at 08:59am
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I also happened to notcie now that Im re-reading..I have you saying BOOSH! quite often now :DD Your welcome! Heh heh. Another word from the Dictionary or Kat Words. xDJuly 9th, 2011 at 08:43am
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bjneiorj liking it so far! I love how you described Billy's emotions. "Ah, fuck! how am I going to hide my fucking hard on?" the whole thing, what's going through his head, made me laugh. noice going!July 9th, 2011 at 07:27am
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I STARTED A NEW PAGE! Bwaha. Meh page.July 9th, 2011 at 02:32am
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Three faces came to mind as I read. ;D :/ :OOOOOO Lol I LOVED this chapter and I can't wait for the next one! Holy sha-molly! He finally kissed her! And I was like..but..what J word? Jerk, Juvenille, JAHOBA WITNESS?! Or maybe..Jelly. Dun dun dun. Lmfao I loved this chapter Marz exquisite writing and Ill be looking forward to the next chapter!!July 9th, 2011 at 02:31am
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When i started reading the chapter i was praying my sister's boyfriend wouldnt take my phone from me lol
:/ cocaine, not cool, man
Holy bananas!!! He kissed her!!
Oh my sweet deity, update soon!July 9th, 2011 at 01:29am -
Billy, what are you doing with your life...? I still love you though.
Ok, now that I'm done talking to Billy. I love this story. I thought I commented, but I guess not. Anyway you're a great writer, please update soon. :DJuly 9th, 2011 at 01:21am -
Update soon please :)July 4th, 2011 at 02:14pm
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hope you updateJuly 3rd, 2011 at 05:19am
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I always feel so weird when I read this, but I can't help but love it. And I love Billy's character and how you write his thoughts. It just kinda pulls you into his mind so you feel like him. I love it and I can't wait for the next update!June 23rd, 2011 at 07:46am
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So absoutely amazing and your writing style is fantastic, really. Really loving it.June 22nd, 2011 at 09:10pm
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Tht photos ADORABLE!!
I hope u add more!! I love this story!June 22nd, 2011 at 08:43pm -
I've been reading this one for a while now, just didn't have time to comment. But I love this story, I especially love how you didn't jump into a smut scene right off the bat and rather you're like building up the apex which is awesome! I can't wait for more!June 22nd, 2011 at 03:21am
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Aweh they had a brother-sister moment. I wonder how Ashen is going to react to it & to their dad. Hmmm....June 22nd, 2011 at 01:29am
Can't believe he kissed her! Eep
What will she do next....maybe kiss back while in shock....or slap him and run away or just freakout
I wonder which one, or maybe none at all lol