Untouchable - Comments

I Love this write more please :D <3

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*update :L

PLEASE UPLOAD THIS <3

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update? This is really good! :-D

I don't usually like incest. It kinda freaks me out. But this is just so tactfully done and actually has a plot before any potential banging. I like it :)

I like how you made the twins not get along. Every other twin incest story I've read usally starts with them being unaturaly close. I realy like this story so far please keep writing.

yah! yah! I want action, too! Pretty, please?..hmmm...the "zing" huh...

you know..you're making me go over the fence..lol, really. At first, I decided to read your story because the guy looked familiar..wherever did I see him, I wonder. Perhaps on Quizilla. Now, it's because of the grammar..I especially love.."being an asshole is just my default setting".....Have a fun day!

woahhhh!!!!Three Days Grace!...Okay, okay..calm down me..I so love Three Days Grace and anyone who loves them!!!!

woahh..the story of the town's original twins Heather and Broker is really scary! So tragic..please, by the power vested upon you(lol, wherever did I get that..) don't write the same fate for the twins...
Have a good day! I'm N, by the way. Just joined Mibba..

I really like this <3

You sister, have one messed up mind, but i love you any way. IT IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ahh Oh my gosh I love it already.
Hehe. He´s starting to have the dirty thoughts.. UPDATE!

typical guy movie ha ha good one.

im liking this very much

Update , like now ?

Uhhh, yeah, Billy and Ashen action! :D

Agrees with comment above. XD

I wonder where that little 'zing' is going to take them, and how many chapters it will take to find out. I respect the 'easing into it', but the wait kills you because it takes time to write good chapters that tie everything in. I'll be waiting ;}