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  • itsnottherealme88

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    You have 75 comments on this story. That's a freaking lot! I just noticed that. Lol

    I loved it. Perfect way to end it. Four kids is a lot! Damn. I laughed when Austin said that he was going to staple kellen's eyes sit. It's hard for me to imagine Austin laying down rules for kids. Maybe because real life Austin doesn't have any. I have a hard time picturing him doing dad things sometimes. It makes me laugh.
    I laughed at the ending too. It fit them perfectly.

    And madison and sal are married. Haha.

    You did a great job on this story, baby. I loved it.
    August 17th, 2013 at 05:00pm
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    Awww! I loved this chapter. All of their kids are crazy! Four is a lot. Lol. Perfect ending to a great story. This has been so much fun to read. I've loved all the silliness and drama. And I love being in it. I'm glad I coerced you into putting me in. Lol.

    You did an amazing job with this story. I loved it. XXOO
    August 17th, 2013 at 04:04am
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    Somehow Madison commented before me. Hmmmm.

    I loved the parts with sal playing with kellen. And madison drinking austins beer. Lol. And yeah, you are obsessed with twins. You have them in literally every story. Mine and Madison's included. Lol. Cute update. Can't wait for the epilogue.
    August 16th, 2013 at 02:30am
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    I loved this chapter. Madison and Sal always bring a fun aspect. And yay for twins! I think you had twins in another life or something. You're friends with us, all of your stories have twins. LOL. Anyways, great chapter. I'm sad its ending, but I'm excited to read the epilouge.
    August 16th, 2013 at 02:26am
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    I agree with Madison, the argument was kind of weird. But so was him taking the pills. So that works. Lol. Very smexy. Haha. I liked it. I'm glad they had a good honeymoon. Though I did like the last honeymoon chapter a little more. But this was fun. Can't wait for the next update. Sorry it took so long to read this one.
    August 14th, 2013 at 11:45pm
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    Ok, so their whole argument was kinda weird, but I'm glad they resolved it. She'll totally get pregnant now. And I see we're back to 50 shades, huh? Lol. Very hot.

    All in all, fun chapter. More soon!
    August 14th, 2013 at 02:24am
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    Puppies with tennis balls, eh? Yay!

    I loved it. Austin was weird, but cool that he wants to have more babies. I liked the part when they were talking to that Mexican guy. That was cute. I didn't get to do a honeymoon chapter in heroes. Maybe I'll do one this time around.

    But this was great. Good job, baby.
    August 12th, 2013 at 12:57am
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    It was really good, very sexy and fun. But I don't understand why instead of just telling Jackie he didnt care if they had a baby, he went behind her back and threw the pills away. Also going through her purse is no bueno. I would go through the roof if I ever found a guy going through my purse or phone. But anywho, great chapter. I loved it.
    August 11th, 2013 at 10:20pm
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    Oh my goodness it was so long! Lol. But of course it was wonderful. Wedding chapters are always so nice. And they're fun to write. And I was in it with my man. Bwahahaha!

    I loved it. Cant wait for the next one.
    August 10th, 2013 at 07:36pm
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    Aww, It was just the quintessential perfect wedding chapter. It was so sweet. It had some funny moments and the whole time I was smiling. I'm going to miss this story.
    August 10th, 2013 at 04:01am
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    I snorted when she told Cody that he chewed like a cow. The whole part with Cody was funny. I could just imagine him swaggering in there like he does, chewing his gum. Lol. This was a fun chapter. I'm excited for the wedding. Those are always fun. :)
    July 23rd, 2013 at 04:32pm
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    Aw, I loved this chapter. It was so sweet and cute. I love puppies! lol. Is the next one the wedding? I liked the part with Cody. He's funny.

    More soon!
    July 22nd, 2013 at 10:23pm
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    I love this story
    July 12th, 2013 at 06:09pm
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    More happy time. The whole chapter was happy. The ending was kind of sad. But it was a nice child. I'm excited for the wedding. Can't wait!
    July 10th, 2013 at 04:42am
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    This story has turned into such a happy happy story. Everyone is all happy and excited and lovely. Its nice. I laughed at my answering service. I would totally do that. lol.

    More soon!
    July 9th, 2013 at 09:24pm
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    More happy happy joy joy. Lol. lots of happy baby time here, and happy couple time.

    Good chapter. Very long. Lol. But good.
    June 15th, 2013 at 03:36am
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    Great chapter, babe! I'm happy they're engaged! It was so sweet. And now I want cheesecake.... lol

    The beginning with the baby was a little long, but it was good. The whole chapter was good. More soon!
    June 15th, 2013 at 01:09am
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    Baby! I feel like even though she just got pregnant again we've been waiting for her to have this baby forever! Lol. I like that name you picked. Very cute. Thats a good word for this chapter: cute. I love any chapter with Cody in it. Haha. Loved it.
    June 12th, 2013 at 06:38pm
  • itsnottherealme88

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    Awww, baby! I love the name, its really cute. I loved this chapter. It was all so sweet, and it was a good look back on their relationship. Great job, babe. Hopefully more soon.
    June 12th, 2013 at 05:02am
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    Okay, first thing. As soon as I saw the title my heart stopped because I was sure that you were going to kill Austin. Then the beginning when she didn't want to go to work and he was leaving. Oh my god. You have no idea. I was sure Austin was about to get dead.

    But how sad that it was her dad. :( I'm happy that he finally forgave Austin though. That was good. I liked her puppy taking care of her until Austin came home.
    June 6th, 2013 at 11:52pm