Baby You're My Breath - Comments

How sad. I knew as soon as I saw the chapter title someone was going to die. I don't hate you like you thought. I mean, how dramatic. :P

It was a very sad chapter. You did a good job. More soon.

Yay! She's pregnant and they're back together and happy, and Austin quit doing drugs! So much happy happy joy joy in this chapter. Sal is such a chick, oh my god. LOL. But he's a good friend. I really enjoy what he and Madison bring to this story.

Now they get to have their baby that they wanted. Yay!

Great chapter.

Well good, they get to have their baby. that's exciting. Sal was cracking me up. This was a good chapter. I'm glad they're back together and happy again. Good job, babe. More soon!

I'm going to hold off on the captain obvious jokes... Oh wait. Just pretend I didn't say that. ;)

I love Cody. That little part where he was mocking her on the phone was adorable. I could picture him doing that perfectly. He is the best.

This was a nice little filler, that was obviously necessary. Hopefully they will be getting back together soon.

*cough* pregnant, *cough*

Now that thats out of the way.... ;)

I enjoyed this chapter. I love Cody. And he's so sweet. I'm liking that friendship between him and Jackie. Also, the part about my sandwiches... My eating habits are not wierd! Its not my fault peanut butter is delicious and goes with everything.

Good chapter. More soon!!!

Well I liked it too. Haha.

It was a very good chapter. This story actually isn't as long as I thought it was. I thought we were nearing fifty chapters. Lol.

But yeah, good for Jackie. This if what she should have done in the beginning. But drug addicts can be very charming and manipulative and she rolled over for him. Now she needs to make him do this for himself. Verygood chapter.

This was probably my favorite chapter for this story recently. The emotions were on point. It was really great. Hopefully Jackie sticks to her guns and doesnt go back to him until the pill thing is resolved. I could see her crumbling and going back to him just because she can't stand to not be with him, and in the end that would just be sweeping it under the rug until she found more pills or something.

Ok, gonna rap it up. Great chapter. More soon.

Yay yyyyyy!!!!! Codyyyyyy! My man kicking that idiots ass. What a dick. Grrr. Poor Jackie, but at least the guys were there so nothing really bad happened too her. It was not horse shitty.

Ok, first of all, it was not horrible. You're too hard on yourself. It was actually not a bad transition chapter. It got the point across about Austin meeting Cody and forming that friendship. Not too shabby. You need to update more! lol

Well, there if no way in hell that he would have gotten off that easy on the drug thing. I would have raised hell and done something more to ensure that he wasn't doing drugs anymore. Even if that meant leaving for a whiledo he can get his shit together. That can't just be sweet talked away.

But yeah, this was a good chapter. More soon?

Jackie needs to stick to her guns with Austin about the drugs rather than just roll over and have sex with him. Its like shes rewarding his bad behavior.

It was a good chapter. Nice to read this one again. I can't believe how long it is! More soon?

Great chapter. I'm happy Jackie is coming around and her and Austin can move on and work on their realationship. Hopefully you start updating this more. I feel bad because I keep forgetting about it because you never update it. lol.

The chapter was really good. More soon.

This one made me think of Heroes. After Sophie's miscarriage when Adam was drinking and in bad shape. Gonna be more thorough with that in the rewrite.

You did good with it though. Is this pill thing going to continue on, or is this poetry much as far as you're gonna go with it? I'm glad Jackie is doing better. Miscarriages are hard to deal with. But its one of those things. It happens and you just have to kind of carry on. So I'm glad she's finally coming around.

Loved it. More soon?

Awesome chapter, babe. Poor Jackie. Its a horrible thing that happened to them, but she can't let it take her over forever. I'm surprused she hasn't been sick already. You can't just go that long without eating or sleeping. Hopefully her support system can help ge her around again.

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Awww. It was so sad! I feel so bad for Jackie and Austin. I'm glad Madison got her cleaned up and fed her a little. It's good they have a support group with their friends and family. Also, it probably wouldnt be a good idea for Austin to bring up having another baby for a long long time. They need a chance to move on from this baby, and also grow up a little. It's easy to forget how young they are.

Great chapter. More soon.

So sad! I knew it was going to happen, but it was still hard to read. You nailed Austin's emotions perfectly. I really liked the part with him talking to Marco. It's true what they say, dog is man (and womans) best friend :). Very good chapter. More soon.

Omg how sad. I knee it was going to happen eventually, but its still sosad. Poor jackie. :(

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This was a nice chapter. It seemed very busy, like there was a lot happening, but it most definitely wasnt hateful. It was sweet. I liked the end.

Very good. More soon?

Aww, I missed this story :) You need to update this one more often too. lol. Great chapter, I liked the part where they were moving in. It was fun. More soon!

Alright first of all, I died laughing when they were going on all dramatic to poor Sal. When Madison was like, if it is a baby. I died. Like wtf else would it be, a dog? Lmao.
I liked the parents dancing. That was sweet.

Great chapter, baby. Well worth the wait.