Baby You're My Breath - Comments

It was a nice chapter. Kind of a filler, but it was very nice. I feel bad for Austin sometimes. Yes she's having the baby and all, but he's like running ragged trying to figure everything out for their future, and then she like, bitches at him sometimes and pouts, then that puts more pressure on him. I guess that's what happens when you're expecting a kid that young.
Great chapter. More soon?

Awww, I loved this one. I really liked the part with Austin talking to his dad. I don't think they should get married. Like Austin said, lots of kids have unmarried parents and they're just fine. I'm excited for the baby to come though :-) More soon? wife

I like this whole commenting right on the story page. Nifty nifty. Lol.
Wow. Drama-rama indeed. I don't even know where to start. That dad of hers is the biggest asshole ever. I mean, my god. Was he supposed to be all happy go lucky about it? No, but still. The things he said were hideous, and the way he acted was worse.
I'm glad that his parents were better about it. At least they have somewhere to start out.
I just love how youthful this whole story is.
Great update. More soon?

O Wow She's Pregnant ...I hope her dad treats both of them different especially since now there's a baby comin soon!! :)

O Wow She's Pregnant ...I hope her dad treats both of them different especially since now there's a baby comin soon!! :)

O Wow She's Pregnant ...I hope her dad treats both of them different especially since now there's a baby comin soon!! :)

Good chapter. I'm kind of mad at how she was treating Austin. Like his life isn't different at all or anything. I hope her dad doesn't freak out too much.

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Well that wasn't how I was expecting it to end! Especially since it was so nice and sweet at the beginning. I love the relationship between Jackie, Madison, and Sal. That whole part was done so well, it was like I could see it all happening. Then... drama-rama! I wasn't expecting that. I was wondering when you were going to add this part to the story. It ended well though. I'm glad they aren't going to break up, at least right now. They need each other.
More soon? Xxoo

Woohoo! More sexy time! Lol. I really really liked this chapter. I'm so glad that you found your notebook so you could update. He's so considerate of her, its so nice. He's just always wanting to know if she's okay and stuff. He was kind of an ass there at the end, but I think he made up for it. Haha. Great update. More soon?

Omfg, stupid phone!

Anyways, finishing my comment. I loved it. It was perfect. Very real, and raw. More soon? Btw, when are you gonna update You Fucking Forced Me? Love you!

Wow, it was long! Now I know why it took you so long to fin ish it. J/k. I loved it. The whole graduation part was fun. For a second there I thought Joe and Austin were going to hug it out and be cool, but then that went down the tubes. I'm glad they finally did it. I feel like its been talked about so much, and now its finally done. I was sad that it hurt her so much. Poor thing. She didn

it that it hurt her so much. Po

aww chapters 13 thru 15 are so cute and awesome all at the same time lol love the story keep writing and keep it going :)

Puppies playing in the soft snow is such a gorgeous mental image. :D

Great chapter. You and Madison getting to ride your adorable men. LOL. Very cute. I was trying to image Madison riding on little Sal. She likes little guys. :P

Boys will be boys, but Sal's little speech was funny. I believed him though, even though it was corny as hell. He's corny, and adorable. The promise ring stuff was funny.

More soon? I lovles you!! xxoo

Heyy your story is AMAZING! When are you going to post the next chapter I just can't wait... I want to know what will happen with her dad. Xoxoxo

Great chapter, baby! It made me wish that it was still Christmas.

I hope that one day Jackie and her dad can be civil with each other again. I just don't know what he's doing. Thank goodness Austin's family is so awesome. I think they're too young to get married. But of course I have different opinions on that matter anyways. The ring and earrings are beautiful. :)

More soon? Really good chapter.

I honestly think this was one of my favorite chapers for this so far. I loved it. Neverminding the typos of course. ;) You need to get some sleep, babe! LOL. I love you.

I loved the ending. It was so good. The emotions were there. I was glad that he didn't take advantage of that situation, because he was right. It would have ended badly. That dad is a fucking nut job. He needs to take a pill or something, Jesus.

Great job, sweets. More soon? Love you!!!

this story is so awesome keep writing and update soon please! :)

I loved it! Good little filler.
The part at the beginning with Madison and Sal made me laugh, and the part when they were getting their pictures taken. When Austin motioned that Madison was short... I snorted a little, not gonna lie. LOL.
I liked the end a lot too. A nice little summer evening.
This story is so young, I love it! It just has a really youthful vibe about it.
More soon? Love you!!

Aww, it was short. But I liked it a lot. I'm glad they're back together again.
The last part was kind of awkward, but I can imagine that it would be kind of an awkward situation.
It was a really nice chapter, baby. I'm so happy they're back together.
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Madison's perfect future boyfriend is perfect. He made a nice addition to this chapter. Why did she keep saying that Austin broke up with her? She kicked him out first. Hopefully they can work it out though, and not break up over what seems to be a silly misunderstanding. Great chapter babe! More soon?