Smile When Your Heart Breaks - Comments

Ahaha I love Delia! You need to update this soon, because I'm about to die. And I definitely think Delia needs to beat the shit outta Bella. Justttt sayin. :D

I love it!! agrees with above ^^

:D I love it! Update soon?

Seems really good so far! =)

It's good. I did however find some things confusing.
1. How does she know about the Cullens being vampires? You just skipped over that.
2. You jump around a lot in scenes. Transitions would possibly make it easier to understand just where we are now when we're reading it.
But I liked it so I'm subscribing :)

Great story so far, cant wait to see where it goes.
update soon!!

I love it so far!! :D

hmmmmmmmm a girl who hates players and put her with Paul. Very nice! I'm excited to read more!

I loved it!! I read in all and I'm caught up :)
I feel bad for her, she likes Paul but he is too much of a manhoe. He needs to work that out.

Brilliant work !

Love the newest chapter! Great job! Paul is such a manwhore.....but a hot manwhore haha! :) Can't wait to read more!

Thanks for the update! :) I loved it!!
update soon!!!

I want you to keep updating but people being stupid makes you not update. I'm a new subscriber by the way... One of my stories were subject to that too and it takes forever for them to get back to you. I've been waiting for four months but if feels way longer to me... Anyways, you are a talented writer and having that many people love your story in such a short time is awesome! It just proves that you should keep writing this story maybe delete it and repost it may work. Just inform us if you do :D Later,

Hailey

aw I like the wolves :) They laugh :) lol Can't wait for more :)

I really enjoyed the story so far.
I as well didn't find any mistakes/errors.
The person reporting you is probably jealous.
Don't let them get to you.
Hope you upate soon!
*Subscribes

I'm mad. * I DO have an Excuse*

Your Welcome! And I'm glad you find them funny.. -_-. I donhave an Excuse tho! I was tired, and it was pretty late. And when I have no sleep I tend to be very jumbled. And can't do anything right.Oh yes! Totally! I got chu's back! :)

I can't see any errors
I love this story so far so
please please please UPDATE SOON!!!! :D

*ON TOP. Gosh Darnit! I can NOT get this right!

That comment totally didn't make sense once I read it. It was 'posed to go- Prettty Pleasee With a Cherry in top! I feel like a fool...