Smile When Your Heart Breaks - Comments

And update soon? Please? Pretttttyyy Please? I'll even add a cheery! :)

Yo! Sorry couldn't reply faster, i haven't been on here to often. Eh, no special reason. I'l post here if you want me to? Whatever is cool with you. Andd, really? Who would report it? Like really? Wish I could help ya with the whole grammar/spelling thing, but, I'm no expert on that. Pretty sure you don't want my help. Lol. But keep up with story! It's good! Don't let these people keep you down. They're probably just jealous anyway. :). Just remember this- I'll kick some hater booty if ya need me too, got it? :) BYE! :]

wtf?!
there ain't nuthin wrong with this!

The story is awesome so far keep up the good work

What the hell!
Who the fuck would report your story?!
Its amazing! GAH!
How dare you stop right there! I need more!
Okay, that's it, if you don't update soon, I will hunt you down and force the next chapter out of you!

PLEASE update? I'll love you forever :D

Ahhh this is awesome so far! haha. I really like this so far, though I'm only one chapter in.

I definately wasn't expecting her to punch Bella, but hey, I'm fine with that :D

Now, to chapter two...

y the heck would someone report this? thats retarded!

"The point of punching someone is to hurt them, cousin dearest; now if you would please place me back onto the ground before I empty my guts on you, that would probably benefit you in the long run.”
She says it like it is plain logic, it is just so funny. Even the wolves were laughing about it.
I really like this chapter, chapter 2, you get to see more about how she is with her family and her friends.

yes i will have a bunch of comments for you :)

I really like how you have that she is a rebel, something Paul can relate to. She isn't some girly girl (i like those too but they get old fast) she is a trouble maker and she like to express herself :)

fave moments in chapter 1- it’s a good thing you got that blue streak out- it looked like a blueberry barfed in your hair and you forgot to wash it out!
I laughed so hard over this one, i wanted blue in my hair for 3 months straight...my parents never let me though. Now I'm glad I didn't lol
next fave part, Bella got punched!!
I'm loved that!!

i can't believe she punched beastly bella in the face!!!
*roflmao*
lol, loved this so far!
*subscribes*

This is an amazing story!

LOVES ITTT!!!!!

its really good so far.

It's is funny when Bella gets her ass kicked....{still laughing}
Still loving the story! Update soon!

can't wait for more!! i love the little fight bit and the wolf scene was funny and cute. I can't wait for another update.

two: Thought her semi-fight with Bella was hilarious, found the paul/wolf scene was extremely cute. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.

Glad that you told me about this afterall. The drama, the descriptions, the plot, the scene where she punches Bell; heck everything, is perfect. Wondering what's going to happen in the next chapter. Wishing there was a picture of Delia.

It's pretty good so far. :) i enjoyed it. So it takes place before Bella was changed and everything, i can see. I'll subscribe :D

Just like with all of your stories, I wasn't disappinted. Great story! Subscibing!