The "Other Girl" - Comments

Amazing. Quite possibly the best story I`ve ever read. <3

I miss this story.

er... poem?

Anyway, I understand not having time to write, and I'm not going to pressure you to update or anything.

I just thought that you might like to know that I am anxiously awaiting the return or this.

You are a very talented writer

update like soon please!!!!

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More updates till the story is done :)

Yay!! Its been AGES!!! I love this so much!

I think I'm going to read this story all the way rom the start again to get caught up because I totally forgot what it's about. So glad you updated though. I still don't think any different of this story - it's still so perfect and simple and beautifully sad. Love it.

I LOVE YOU!

UGH! I'M SO FREAKING HAPPY YOU FINALLY UPDATED! BOO YEAH!

So! I felt so bad for her in this chapter! I felt like smacking Caitlin and her b*tch a**. I mean, if you really love your boyfriend, why the f*ck would you not trust him!? Stupid girl >.<

I STILL LOVE THIS CHAPTER! BRING HAYLEY BACK!

Please?

So glad you're back!!

So glad you're back! Can't wait to see where you go with the story.

oh my god. I LOVE YOU FOR UPDATING!<3 I love this story so much(:

You make my heart heart.
Making an amazing and beautiful story and then not continuing it when the most epic part is about to come.
You.Are.A.Heart.Breaker. </3

Love love love this story. You have such a unique voice, I just can't get enough. Keep writing, even if not on this site! Simply amazing.

UPDATE!
PLEASE!
I WANT/NEEED UPDATES ON THIS STORY, BECAUSE ITS REALLY GOOD!

(all caps because im screaming about how good it is.) :}

Possibly my favorite thing I`ve ever read. Literally. Not even lying. Much love for this lovely story.

I love this, it's beautiful :') I hope you haven't forgotten, please update soon.

Please Update? I miss this story):

I absolutely LO-LO-LOVE "The Other Girl" you better update soon or I will spam. :P
Jk, but seriously, it's awesome. :)

This is wonderfully real and just amazingly relatable (I haven't read anything of yours that wasn't, though) - you really did hit the nail on the head when it comes to getting inside of a teenage girl's head. It's cute, but still dramatic and emotional. And I love her shift near the more recent chapters from being gaga over Nathan to Hayley; I don't know if it's permanent for her or if she'll ever get over Nathan, but I'm stickin' around to see. Another thing I love about this - even though it's told in a poetic format, you're still narrating the story amazingly and you've given the characters so much personality. :D

This is a truly beautiful piece of literature that deserves every bit of attention it gets.
Keep writing, and stay amazing.

I love this! I think it's so sweet how Hayley treats her and ohmygosh! He's British? Can you say hot ;) Anywhom ... Keep updating. You're making a lot of people happy with this story : ))