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  • Isadora Pierce

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    I have read a ton of actual books like this in my lifetime, but never have I ever read one on Mibba or any other site, for that matter. I don't even have WORDS for this right now. It's sweet and innocent and I think it could be easily publishable not because it's written professionally but because it doesn't take a lot to make a poem story amazing, but it takes a great idea and a great author to make it worth reading. I found this on PF and I'm so glad I didn't just skip it because it was long. I love this. I love this enough to just subscribe and whore it out for you. Amazing job so far. Simply one of the best I've ever seen.
    July 21st, 2011 at 01:30am
  • Yay Its Alex!

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    I agree with aamo0033.
    But anyway, like I´ve been saying since Caitlin appeared : die bitch die!
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    update soon?
    June 18th, 2011 at 01:51am
  • AnnieArchie

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    Bad shit happens when your parents call the school.
    BAD. SHIT.
    More please :D
    <3
    June 14th, 2011 at 04:01am
  • beatfreakz

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    Super-Dad! :D

    I loved it, please update :)
    June 14th, 2011 at 01:48am
  • Princess Kay

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    this is totally awesome. the writing is amazing, and you capture the characters so well. i love it please update soon :)
    June 14th, 2011 at 01:26am
  • sourpatchz

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    omg! I'm like in love wit ur story!lol:)
    June 10th, 2011 at 11:25am
  • Birchly Reid

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    Poor girl :'(
    June 8th, 2011 at 01:34pm
  • ElizabethCoffman

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    I loved it. :] you should write more. :D I haven't talked to you in forever.
    June 8th, 2011 at 06:49am
  • AnnieArchie

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    Bitch be jealous. Our main lady needs to overcome this bitch business & show Caitlin who's BOSS.
    More please :D
    June 8th, 2011 at 06:07am
  • ClairedeeCat

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    I love it. I've never really liked this style of writing, but you're so good! And this is adorable and totally relatable :]
    June 8th, 2011 at 03:07am
  • ninjapoptart

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    Beautiful, reminds me of the style that Ellen Hopkins writes in.
    June 8th, 2011 at 02:08am
  • Mexicano Cheeto

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    Yayyy! Hayley! <3 I'm so glad Camilla is crushing on him now! :D UPDATE!
    June 5th, 2011 at 03:52am
  • ElizabethCoffman

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    :D I don't know what to say. I read it yesterday, subscribed, and looked again today and there was a new chapter. I was like jumping up and down clapping. I love the story. It's unique. :D Keep on writing missy.
    June 3rd, 2011 at 07:21pm
  • AnnieArchie

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    Awesome stories have awesome readers ;)
    I love the way you said how Camilla loved how Nathan treated her, that is (SO VERY) true in most cases. Ladies love gentlemen :D
    More please! <3
    June 3rd, 2011 at 05:50pm
  • Birchly Reid

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    I absolutely love this story, more? pwettty pweese? :3
    June 3rd, 2011 at 05:48pm
  • Yay Its Alex!

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    gosh i tried like 7 tiems to open this but the link in my email wouldnt work i was all : OPEN THE F*CK UP!...
    anywho, pff well duh Caitlin stupid.
    June 3rd, 2011 at 09:29am
  • SabasaurusRex

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    Very nice job with the character development, but I feel as if the story is at a standstill, you know? Almost as if nothing new is really developing. Still a very enjoyable read, though. Kudos :)
    June 3rd, 2011 at 04:35am
  • onc3 upon a tim3

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    Wow. It's so different. I lvoe it. (inside joke but i mean i love it) Really & honestly. One of the greatest things i've read on this site so far. More please!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 3rd, 2011 at 02:54am
  • nolifelowlife

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    its been a while since i have commented but let me tell you its getting better and better... I am super happy she finally let go of him and went with Haley.... I hope he likes her too they would make an awesome couple...
    June 3rd, 2011 at 02:43am
  • the woman.

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    Aw yeah. Stick it to that bitch, Camilla!
    She doesn't matter anymore :D
    June 3rd, 2011 at 02:13am
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