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  • Ave.Maria.

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    ooh cliffhanger! I think I want it to be Hayley but I have a suspicion it could just turn around and turn out to be Nathan which would make things pretty complicated... (: Update soon!
    May 26th, 2011 at 06:55am
  • jojo13617

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    Please let it be Hayley. I love him and I think it's him(:
    May 26th, 2011 at 02:50am
  • skaterdee

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    I think its Haliey
    May 26th, 2011 at 02:19am
  • OldTimeReligion

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    "Do his parents hate him?"
    I love that line! XD
    I say that all the time!
    I must met your Nonna. She sounds like a wonderful lady to know :)
    May 26th, 2011 at 01:26am
  • akanevampire19

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    Who was the one that complemented her???!!! I wanna know!! =D
    May 26th, 2011 at 12:55am
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    Who said it?
    0.0 whoo the fuck said it?
    May 26th, 2011 at 12:52am
  • Yay Its Alex!

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    Oh snap!
    May 24th, 2011 at 01:36am
  • xLovex007

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    Okay so i love this story, that is all.
    May 23rd, 2011 at 11:49pm
  • Birchly Reid

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    Dawws, keep writing
    May 21st, 2011 at 10:28am
  • Yay Its Alex!

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    “Boy problems,” I say.
    Gianna walks into my room,
    Plops herself down on my bed,
    And says,
    “Spill.”

    So little and yet I for some reason just Adored those lines.
    "Spill" haha Please update soon!
    May 21st, 2011 at 07:59am
  • summer's pathetic.

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    love it. :P
    May 20th, 2011 at 05:12pm
  • AnnieArchie

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    I'd choose frozen yogurt :)
    More please! <3
    May 19th, 2011 at 07:56pm
  • Yay Its Alex!

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    eh i dont really ice cream....
    May 19th, 2011 at 10:12am
  • the woman.

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    I can see why everyone likes this so much.

    It's well done.

    You deserve the good fiction list and all your stars.
    May 19th, 2011 at 04:46am
  • beatfreakz

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    Love your story. Read it one shot, hehee :P
    Love how it's written *--*
    I'll be waiting for an update :)
    May 19th, 2011 at 01:15am
  • summer's pathetic.

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    LOVE THISS<3
    May 18th, 2011 at 09:52pm
  • Birchly Reid

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    Love. It. Update soon!!!
    May 17th, 2011 at 01:25pm
  • Yay Its Alex!

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    Ive been in her position....
    Update please.
    May 17th, 2011 at 07:29am
  • AnnieArchie

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    I second the commenter's above list with #2 ^^^
    More please!
    May 17th, 2011 at 05:33am
  • teenagemutantme

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    Okay a few things

    1. I love this, very much. I'm hooked already and on the fifthchapter, but had to stop to compliment and comment- commeplient;)

    2. Layout is genius, I like the picture for the banner you used and colors.

    3. Also how it is written, I very much enjoy. I like that the quality of it is meaningful, but written to the point where it's not filled with huge words, which tend to get distracting and boring. I like the poem style, it's genius, and you write it beautifully.

    Anway, I thought I'd just say I love! And subscribed.:)
    May 17th, 2011 at 04:54am
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