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  • akanevampire19

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    more updates pleaseeee!
    May 17th, 2011 at 03:57am
  • nolifelowlife

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    Goodness she should let her self fall for him it never hurts to try... If I were her I would I dont know try and be closer to him you know tell him with out telling him how she feels... haha anyway I love this story im glad you updated.....
    May 16th, 2011 at 10:29pm
  • Birchly Reid

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    Aww they're so cute. Maybe she should just forget Nathan and get with Hayley? Then again that would't be much of a story I suppose...
    May 16th, 2011 at 09:35pm
  • AnnieArchie

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    LOVE the story title in relation to these past couple of chapters :D
    I was wondering about the quotation marks....
    More please! <3
    May 15th, 2011 at 02:58pm
  • Birchly Reid

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    Yay fourth page! sorry had to
    May 14th, 2011 at 10:21am
  • Birchly Reid

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    Lol, I love it where she cuts Nonna off, bet Hayley was a little confused when he's hearing only one side of a conversation and it was in a different language but he heard his name, I would've been confused.

    Update sooon!!!!!!!!!!
    May 14th, 2011 at 10:20am
  • After Twilight

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    L.O.V.E. It!!!!
    I will always love this story!!!
    It's so gorgeous:D
    Update soon,
    I need to read more!!!
    May 14th, 2011 at 09:06am
  • After Twilight

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    L.O.V.E. It!!!!
    I will always love this story!!!
    It's so gorgeous:D
    Update soon,
    I need to read more!!!
    May 14th, 2011 at 09:06am
  • Mexicano Cheeto

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    "Do his parents hate him?" LOL! /i cracked up at that. Keep up the good work!
    May 13th, 2011 at 10:46pm
  • Duct Tape

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    Love it. Update soon please! :)
    May 13th, 2011 at 09:20pm
  • Yay Its Alex!

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    Since Hayley is starting to grow on me, I say she can forget Nathan, Hayley is cooler !:3
    May 13th, 2011 at 03:57am
  • Mexicano Cheeto

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    Hayley and Camilla= LOVE! I like Hayley better than Nathan. :) His story about getting sent to the office was really cute. <3
    May 12th, 2011 at 01:30am
  • Birchly Reid

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    This story is amazing, I love the yay it's set out. Update soon? Hayley and Camilla seem really good for each other and I think Caitlen is such a bitch
    May 11th, 2011 at 11:29pm
  • akanevampire19

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    I like Hayley! =D He's really funny! =D
    May 11th, 2011 at 11:04pm
  • AnnieArchie

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    This is such an original, creative idea!
    And I love how it works with my ADD, short and sweet.
    Sometimes telling a story in the simplest of ways is best :)
    More please!
    May 11th, 2011 at 09:13pm
  • sharkygoesrawr

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    i love this!!! :D
    update soon.
    May 11th, 2011 at 09:51am
  • Painted Smiles

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    AWE! I absolutely adore the last chapter! And you even have more subs then me! You lucky person! <3
    Updates? :D
    May 11th, 2011 at 02:33am
  • After Twilight

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    Still
    Love love loving it!!!!
    I really hope she gets over Nathan
    and goes with Hayley
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    though that seems totally unlikly lol
    Update soon,
    okey-dokey???
    May 10th, 2011 at 09:04am
  • nolifelowlife

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    well shucks maybe she should forget about her friend and his snobby girlfriend and get with the new dude they would make such a cute couple....anyway love the updates super ... your making me love poetry all over again im grateful... those little phrases say so much and it makes an incredible story... thank you
    May 10th, 2011 at 02:56am
  • Mexicano Cheeto

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    Hayley= LOVEE! <3
    May 10th, 2011 at 12:24am
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