Play in the Surf - Comments

To be honest, I'm glad he's gettin away from Gallagher. Gallagher has really messed up. He's back down to 0. I can't believe he's sucha prick. My Kola doesn't deserve that kind of treatment. Kola deserves better. I hope Gallagher drowns in misery, self-pity, guilt, regret and lonesome. I hope he does. I hope he realizes how he acted and that he can't always get what he wants right away. He couldn't realize that Kola wasn't ready for an offical relationship. I hope Gallagher's life is flippin ruined and miserable and unlivable. Ugh ! He's driven Kola away. I can't believe he called Kola stupid for his stutter and didn't help him when he hurt his leg ! That prick. I hope he drowns in all the salt water around Hawii. Stupid. Mother. Trucking. Gay. Trucker.

Oh yeah, someone (or two someones) is(are) getting castrated.
HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?!?!
you said itd get worse but you didn't say it'd get this bad.
fucking hell.

i feel so bad for Kola!!!!!! and Gallagher is an overdramatic esel. SIE ESEL!!!!!
sorry i went german there for a minute. i loved the udpate and hey we all get busy at times. it was good and i STILL wanna kick Gallagher's ass. may i? pretty pretty please with a bunch of sugar and goodness on top?

Christ.
That boy is so overdramatic.
And I mean Gallagher, not Kola.

I love the fact that Nikolai will wear dresses (: lol
I also love the twist in tghis update, it was so unexpected!!<3

aweeeeeeeeee :(
he kinda took a blow to his confidance
but thats okay
i dont think nikolai was ready for it D:
anyways
SARIIIII mssg me bby i need to talk to you (:
ilyyy guys <3

awww... someones ego got hurt. lol. great chapter!

Wow.
I seriously didn't see that coming.
I kinda wanna castrate someone right now..

*inner black woman coming out*
Damn boy! What the fuck you doin'?
God damn, you fucking idiot! Why you so stupid?
That shit ain't gettin' you nowhere!
*she left*

What the hell? Really? He is such an asshole when he doesn't get his way!
He reminds me of one of my friends, which isn't necessarily a very good thing.
I'm leaving you now so you can fix it, yeah?

yeah i'm NOT happy right now! they're supposed to be together! grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

Asshole move Gallagher. Asshole move. Being a dick like that won't get you anymore. And being a imature dick because you got rejected was uncalled for. You don't even deserve Kola if that's how your gunna act and not take into concideration that he isn't ready.

My internet JUST started to work again and this is the first story i read :D luv it!

I've been glued to this story for hours :D it's great!! More soon please :3 ~*~

Awe, this just keeps getting better and better!
But seriously, what up with the chick on the dock? That didn't look good.
And I'm kinda iffy about the dress'n'heels thing. I like it, but I kind of agree with sacrilegiousx. Though, I do remember it being mentioned once of him being...oh shit, I forget the word. But it's where people don't really call themselves by any gender specifically and relate to both.
Damn, now I'm going to be trying to remember that word for the rest of the night. Ahh...(*facepalm*)

Great story! It's really cute :)

okay T_T
fucking no
heels?
really?
wtf bro?
im sorry but i just dont agree with this whole "i wear dresses and wear heels" thing T_T
i mean, i know its fun to look for dresses
but he's a boy for christ's sake, and IM NOT SAYING BOYS SHOULDNT WEAR DRESSES
i have no problem against drags or transexuals.
HOWEVER. T_T
the boy is a boy that's awkward about everything.
INCLUDING MASTURBATING -which was hot btw-
so think about it
would he wear a dress in public and HEELS where people could humiliate him?
I THINK NOT!

Lol thanks i <3 her :) great chapter! can't wait for more!

Awh. Tyki and Kyte.
It was gonna happen and I'm so glad it did.
I love that Gallagher is finally treating Kola like the princess he is.

Oh. My. God. That made me laugh and giggle. He's so awkward its cute ! He should have let Gallagher help him ;)
Who was that girl ? Gallagher is still untrusted by me. Be careful Kola. >.>
And oh yay ! (: Kyte and Tyiki are together ! Eepp !

hahahahahahahahahahaha that rocked man. that kitten was too cute! i remember when my kitty was that small and cute and fluffy!

newho!
awwww poor Kola! never had a boner before? how sweetish