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  • crescendo.

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    Awww! Kota! He never had a boner before?
    That's so cute!
    May 19th, 2011 at 05:28am
  • Durch-Den-Monsun-87

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute
    May 18th, 2011 at 10:15pm
  • MissPunkRawk

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    This story makes me want to go to th beach. I haven't surfed in years.
    May 18th, 2011 at 04:58pm
  • wingslax96

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    awwwwwww <3 so cute! :)
    May 18th, 2011 at 02:11pm
  • bones n' feathers.

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    yep that summed it up
    happy
    but short
    xD
    ahha
    but still cute (:
    so
    now
    sexy time? (;

    also, between kyte and the other boy
    ouiiouii? :D
    May 18th, 2011 at 12:55pm
  • crescendo.

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    Love it <3
    May 18th, 2011 at 05:13am
  • Nytestalker

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    I'm happy now!
    Yay!
    But Kola may have gone too easy on him.
    If Gallagher fucks up again I might have to kick his ass with my new machine >.>
    May 18th, 2011 at 05:12am
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    I would have given that asshole a much bigger earful and make him fudging understand how I felt and that I was drop dead fucking serious. That's what Kola shoulda done. Make that asshole listen and prove. I don't trust him. I just don't. Kola should be careful. Stupid Gallagher. I don't care how hot he is, just ugh. He still only has 2 points. And Kola is still ahead with like 12473 or some number. Ugh. And what about uh.. um.. the dude who likes Kyte ? I forgot his name /= but what about him ? Are him and Gallagher's friend gunna go out or what ! Ughh.
    But good update. :)
    May 18th, 2011 at 04:57am
  • done in love.

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    That's supposed to say "I found this yesterday" not "the yesterday".
    Oh well. :P
    May 14th, 2011 at 02:42am
  • done in love.

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    God damn you, you mother fucking ass holes!
    *words of love, I swear*
    I found this the yesterday and i just have to say, this is fucking amazing!
    I love that it takes place in Hawaii! It's such a neglected state, in books and any other forms of entertainment. Plus, Russia is one of my all around favorite countries, so this is just so much more amazing.
    The relationship between Nikolai and Gallagher is so contradictory that it's great!
    I cannot physically begin to explain to you how much I am utterly in love with this story.
    May 14th, 2011 at 02:41am
  • ktxdd33

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    Loved the update!! You are sooooooo awesomeee! !!(:
    May 13th, 2011 at 11:07pm
  • majoji

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    AAAH! I'm going crazy! I want Nikolai and Gallagher to go to it! Do the nasty! So. Much. *gasping for air* sexual. Tension!
    May 13th, 2011 at 06:16pm
  • wingslax96

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    aww soo cute lol. Gallager's still a jerk tho... haha. great chapter!
    May 13th, 2011 at 05:34pm
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    A little to forgiving for my like BUT I guess it counts a little for him bein in that kind of mess. /: as much as I hate him, he deserves at least 4 points. But he better not do that again to my baby Kola. >:l or I'll personally rip his ball sack off. Just saying.
    But loved the update !
    May 13th, 2011 at 02:17pm
  • Nytestalker

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    You know what, bitch? Haa. Just playing XD
    Yes, that cliffy is resolved but now youve got to tell me what happens when he wakes up!
    Jeez, are you trying to get yourself killed? Cause I can make that a reality >.>
    May 13th, 2011 at 01:12pm
  • Durch-Den-Monsun-87

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    nlfjszldkjf;lzkdsj;jngfdljadslkjg;lkdjflasd
    YOU JUST HAD TO END IT THERE DIDN'T YOU!!!!!!!!!!!
    *crosses arms and glares*
    i wanted more
    May 13th, 2011 at 06:29am
  • crescendo.

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    The was sad!
    I was reading, and there was two chapters, and then there wasn't another after the fricking second one!
    And god damnit! I fricking was off the fricking comment page!
    May 13th, 2011 at 05:24am
  • Nytestalker

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    Noooooo!
    You can't leave it there!
    I have half a mind to call you a bitch but that's mean :(
    Don't let it happen again though....
    ....stupid fucking cliffy.
    May 13th, 2011 at 04:51am
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    Yeah you basterd, that's honestly how you should feel. Kola: 1000 points, Gallagher: 0.
    May 13th, 2011 at 03:42am
  • Durch-Den-Monsun-87

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    fkajf;asdfhadsiuhfda;ouoa;ehfaodshf;aofdsih!!!!
    why the fuck did he faint?
    im not really complaining though i mean he SHOULD feel bad!!!!
    newho i hope you update soon!!!!!!
    May 13th, 2011 at 03:16am