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  • Lost_In_The_Echo

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    This is really good tbh. I normally don't read stuff like this unless its canon bother and sister pairings but yours is good! Update again soon!
    June 18th, 2013 at 08:54pm
  • VengeanceLover

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    Brilliant story so far,
    I hope you think so too! Although i think
    you should take in some comments like
    space out your story and let us know more
    about the characters :)
    Thats all and keep on writing
    >3 Well Done
    July 25th, 2011 at 01:48am
  • Clik

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    More More More !!!!! :) :) :)
    July 23rd, 2011 at 08:08am
  • aquapinkgreen.

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    DUUUUUUUUUUUUDE
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!

    UPDATE, PLEEEEEEEEEEASE :C
    Sad face will go away once you update, okay?
    June 1st, 2011 at 08:15pm
  • Lost

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    I need more!!! SO GOOD!!!!
    May 22nd, 2011 at 06:14am
  • Tout_Se_Qui_Brille

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    Can't wait for the next update.
    April 30th, 2011 at 04:29am
  • tigger97

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    Its really good:)
    cant wait till the nextvch.
    UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
    April 27th, 2011 at 09:23am
  • Onesacrifice

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    i dont usually like this stuff but its cool i like it xD update
    April 18th, 2011 at 11:12am
  • JustAKissAway

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    UUUUPPPDDDDAAAATTTTTEEEE!!! Pwease????????
    April 16th, 2011 at 09:21pm
  • lollipop102

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    awww
    April 15th, 2011 at 04:16am
  • Mes Reves

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    Update soon!
    April 13th, 2011 at 11:37pm
  • Clik

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    That Was Good (:
    April 13th, 2011 at 09:44am
  • XoNeSeCrEtX

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    Awwwhh update soon
    April 12th, 2011 at 12:42am
  • nathalii47

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    xD
    April 11th, 2011 at 03:36pm
  • D E L E T E D

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    Cale is a jealous little fucker. He can't have his cake & eat it to. Love that we get to see Ali come out of her shell. I love this story so far. Keep it up.
    April 11th, 2011 at 08:18am
  • Your Soul Is My High

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    Oh and I agree with 'little motorkitty;' about focusing on the characters more than the sexy stuff, and as a suggestion, I think you should try and develop the characters more than just what they look like and the fact that they love each other.
    April 11th, 2011 at 07:49am
  • Your Soul Is My High

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    So I'm assuming that he has very bad anger and depression problems...
    April 11th, 2011 at 07:41am
  • aquapinkgreen.

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    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT
    UPDATE!
    HELLZ YEAH >D

    I be uber happy, thankies.
    And yush, CALEB DOES NOT CONTROL HER LIFE!
    Gawsh...

    Anyways (:
    KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
    AND I AM NOT SURE IF THE BRO'S NAME IS CALEB :P
    Blekh to my head.

    OKAY BYE! (:

    -Mai
    April 10th, 2011 at 09:13pm
  • vices

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    If he loved her enough, he should have TOTALLY gone back for her.
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    After all, she can't afford to do something drastic! D:
    ANYWAYS.
    I loved this update, it was so intense! O:
    more, please?(:
    April 10th, 2011 at 08:51pm
  • XoNeSeCrEtX

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    updatee sooonnn :3
    April 10th, 2011 at 08:48pm
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