I Never Thought I'd Fall for You - Comments

I love it cant wait for more...
Drama sparks

I think you need to focus more on the characters rather than the "sexy stuff". The character of Sandra seems cliche, unrealistic and forced, it's an overused stereotype and you should try working on it. Also there's little detail given on the main characters, Ali and Caleb. You have a few grammer and spelling mistakes as well, you should maybe try getting a Beta reader.

Can't wait for the next update.

I dun mind short chapters , you update a lot ! :DDD
I really liked this chapter . . . Well not in the good way , but you know .
[[Insert sad face here for Ali]] CALEB YOU DUN OWN HER !!!!!!!!
Update soon!
<3

I like your story, but the chapters are too short and I got bored.

Dude . Dude . Dude . Dude . FREAKIN' UPDATE !!
I NNNNEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDD to see what Caleb does to Ali ! I need need NEED too !!
Please ! Please ! Please ! PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Update soon!
<3

ILY BITCH!!!!! Hehe.....JK.....I love ur stories

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :P

update sooonn :3

AAAAAAAAAAAH
NO
NONONONONONOONONONONOO

WHY CALEB, WHY?!
Evil Caleb
Evil Sandra...
GAH! :C

I LOVE THE STORY ANYWAYS (:
UPDATE ASAP!!! <3

ijfundfjdilfkrmc update soon! i want to see what happens. XD

OH.
OHBB.
OHBBBB(;
LOL.
anyways.
I LIKE IT. A LOT.
nevermind.
I LOVE IT. A LOT.
update soon, please?(:

LOve this story
Im gonna subscribe

Uhtt Ohh . Caleb ain't gonna like this Gabe dude .
But Aliiiii doesss [: Mmm they're cute .
But I think Cale and Ali are better . I know it's cliche , that you always go for the guy you think he'll end up with , but yeah .
WOULDN'T BE A HUGE TWIST IF GABE AND CALEB GOT TOGETHER ??! o_O

If you make Gabe an asshole your ass is mine he just seems so sweet

no offense or anything, but i really don't like how you keep calling me/us/the readers/the subscribers bitches. it's just really pissing me off. but whatever. update soon, yeah?

SANDRA YOU LITTLE SLUT ! BACK OFF OF CALEB !!!!
Goddamn !
Update soon
<3

I love it!!!!!!!

I really hate Sandra.
She pisses me off so freaking much it isn't even funny.
But I laugh anyways(:
ANYWAYS.
update soon, please?

more PLEASE