April 7th, 2011 at 07:36am
I Never Thought I'd Fall for You - Comments
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xDApril 6th, 2011 at 04:51pm
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Aww they are so cute.. Cant wait for the next updates... I love this story <3April 6th, 2011 at 02:55pm
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Ok, wtf does he see in Sandra, Can´t he see the B-i-t-c-h, she really is?
Ohmygosh Update or I´ll die.April 6th, 2011 at 01:32pm -
xDApril 6th, 2011 at 08:51am
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more PLEASEApril 6th, 2011 at 08:47am
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I don't usually like twincest but this is actually pretty good =)
Continue pleaseApril 6th, 2011 at 07:54am -
haha what the rest of 'em said :D new update soon!April 6th, 2011 at 07:40am
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Sandra.
is.
a bitch.
update soon, please?(:April 6th, 2011 at 07:27am -
I love this! Please keep writing!April 6th, 2011 at 12:47am
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This Is Amazing !!April 5th, 2011 at 03:13pm
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<3 :DApril 5th, 2011 at 01:58pm
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Hot. But this reminds me of one of the stories I subscribed to and it was pretty much porn in every chapter. After a while that gets kinda boring :/ I'll keep reading though and see what happens. Caleb and Sandra and kinda shit, Ali is okay, but she's still a tad boring and we (the readers) still don't really know all that much about them in general, like about them personally besides the fact they're all hot for each other.
Maybe I'm just like that cause I'm studying writing and I appreciate the good, sexy lead up and build that follows with the hottest sex scenes ever! haha. I'm a stickler for details and descriptions with a little affection or something.
But just so you know, I do like smut, I'm not being a bitch cause I'm prudish, haha :) I still have faith in you though that it'll get better and I hope you don't take offense to anything I've said, I'm just being constructive (or I hope it's how it sounds)
Love the sex, just be more into the story, not the smut.April 5th, 2011 at 01:01pm -
i completely agree with SpellsUnderTheStars... i mean, Caleb seems so sexy and the scenes were well written, but there wasn't much background to it. i also don't understand why Caleb has this chapter about the Sandra bitch. haha, i thought he was in love with Ali? perhaps i'm confused because you haven't posted the next chapter, but whatever. alright, but i do like the story! i like the whole tree thing, hehe. ^.^April 5th, 2011 at 05:59am
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Heart it keep going just need to know the characters a little betterApril 5th, 2011 at 03:04am
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this. is. awesome!April 4th, 2011 at 12:33pm
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<3April 3rd, 2011 at 05:13pm
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I don't usualy have a problem reading this stuff, incest and sex wise, but this is just incredibly off-putting and I was kinda hoping you were gunna ease into it, not go straight to the dirty.
The sex scenes are hot and all, but it'd be much better if there was some good build up, haha. :)April 3rd, 2011 at 03:48pm -
'tis good! keep updating :DApril 3rd, 2011 at 02:39pm
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likey likey likey :DApril 3rd, 2011 at 01:28pm
Gabey baby.
He sounds like a honey, but I dunno, something seems wrong about him :\
ANYWAYS.
great update! :D
Update soon, please?
I'd type more, but I have an essay to attend to >_>