Deceitful - Comments

How could Zacky just up and leave the guys like that in the middle of the tour [with three months left]? Especially Brian? When all he wanted to do was get back to the bus and talk to him until he went missing.

Loved it. :)

I love this story so much! subscribed :)

Poor Brian is worried to death! :(

Oh lol this is like playing where's waldo......but seriously where's Zacky.....

Great chapter! :)
I'm dying to find out where Zacky is, and I hope Brian and him can patch up their problems.
Also, not so sure I like this Erika person...
Lovely update, you leave me wanting more as usual! Can't wait for more.

Loved the update. I hope Zacky is okay and that things work out. I can't wait to see what happened to Zacky. I just hope he isn't hurt or in the hospital or something.

So I think that Zacky's out looking for Brian, since Brian took off. But that's just me, haha! I have no idea ;p

Well that was... a fun chapter. A little fast- paced, but good anyways.

Hmm...

I'm wondering if he went back to that same spot where Brian had kissed him after he kicked Mariah off the bus...

Loved it. :)

Where did Zacky go?
Nice update :)

nooo brian D:

please update soon!!!

I love your storyy!!!
Oh shit! Brian passed out?! In the middle of the street and no-one knows where he is? Shit! That can't be good... And Zacky... :(

Where did Zacky go? He didn't try to do anything stupid did he??
Please update soon.

I loved the update. I hope Zacky is okay. Please update soon.

Hope Brian's going to be okay...

Wonder where Zack went ? Hope he went looking for
Brian . Hope he's okay too.

Zacky is missing?! D: nooo </3

Well anyway, I like this story(:

Oh damn, more drama

By the way, Zacky looks really pretty on the banner :)

Hell yeah! Zacky kicked her out? I'm freaking out right now! :D

Hope you update soon :)

I loves it~