Deceitful - Comments

I loved this update. Can't wait for the next one. This story is awesome.

Loved it. :)

Hope everything will be okay between Brian and Zack (including the rest of the guys, knowing they were worried about him).

And, Happy Thanksgiving to you too. :D

I love this story. Please update soon.

Loved it. :)

Hope things get better for Brian...

damn! Go Brian! But if they had a show later that night... what will ahppen? o.0

Is Mariah gone? I hope she is. I hope you update this soon

Oh shit! Oh shit! Oh Shit! Oh shit! Oh shit! Oh Shit! Oh shit! Oh shit! Oh Shit! Oh shit! Oh shit! Oh Shit! Oh shit! Oh shit! Oh Shit! I keep on saying that, can't seem to stop! Fuck! Oh my God! I'm freaking dying! The suspense is killing me! How will Zacky react? Aaaah! God-damn it!

...still mad with Zacky though. He should have remembered the pact himself instead of having Val and Michelle to remind him. So yeah, I'm still mad.

Yay Brian!

Although I'm willing to bet Zacky will push him away...Wait, you can't bet against me because you have the power to change what happens :P

Loved it. :)

I hope Zacky doesn't look at Brian in disgust.. and decide not to be his friend again...

I hope Zacky decides to try out the relationship with his best friend,

Okay literally just said 'oh my god' at the last part of the chapter. I wonder what Zacky's gonna say. I really hope that he dumped that whore. ANYWAYS I hope you update soon

Poor Brian..

I hope Zacky's dumped that b*tch... and has gone to search for Brian to tell him how SORRY he is. Although he probably won't.. And, hopefully his friends (along with Val and Michelle) will knock some sense into his ass...

Loved it. :)

Poor Brian... This chapter brought tears to my eyes. It's so sad how Brian is so in love with his best friend and can't have him. My heart is aching for Brian.

Aww poor Brian :( I really hope that Zacky dumped that whore. But then again if she is that manipulative he probably didn't. Brian doesn't deserve to lose Zacky over her though. Anyways I hope you update soon.

I'm happy that Brian didn't stay there because they would've gotten into a horrible fight. I feel so bad for Brian though. He doesn't deserve all this.

Oh shit this is not good...Zacky walked in and now things are gonna get worse aren't they?
Please update soon.

Oh shit... So Zacky walked in on them...? And I bet he'll believe her. Fuck.

Oh my god! Poor Brian...shits really going to go down now...

I just knew that Mariah was up to something--the no good whore.

I can't even believe that she would just up and kiss Brian like that when he wants nothing to do with the good for nothing woman.

And now she's making Zacky fight with Brian...

Zacky really needs to wake up and realize that this girl is no good for him....

Loved it. :)

I just knew that Mariah was up to something--the no good whore.

I can't even believe that she would just up and kiss Brian like that when he wants nothing to do with the good for nothing woman.

And now she's making Zacky fight with Brian...

Zacky really needs to wake up and realize that this girl is no good for him....

Loved it. :)

Omg Zacky is acting like a child update soom please