Hm... this looks like it's going to be a truly real story, like ruines. had said. You don't see too many of those on here, so it's cool that you're taking up the courage to write it. :) And you not only cover like, what one girl goes through, but five, and five different things that make them think they're not perfect. So... really can't wait for more of this. You should definitely keep this going. :) Definitely... subscribed! :D
I'm interested to see where this story is going (: I like the fact that you've added some diversity into here and that your story has different ethnicities in here because I'm Asian myself and it's always cool reading about Asians. :3
I really really like where this is going . You don't see many stories about real everyday problems enough on here . This is a good start . Keep it going :]
I love this story it has so much meaning it's nice someone is taking a chance and writing an original story and not just another fan fic about Justin Bieber or someone else popular keep writing
So... really can't wait for more of this. You should definitely keep this going. :)
Definitely... subscribed! :D