Dance in the Dust - Comments

  • Lilylithius

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    I love thissss(:
    Uppdateee.♥
    June 30th, 2011 at 06:29pm
  • matthuee.

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    Levi is such a sweetie pie! c:
    And I think I'd be like Geoffery over there. LOL.
    June 16th, 2011 at 02:28pm
  • revengefulvampire

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    Levi is the cutest and he saves the day! What more could you want?!
    Geoffery needs to chill out!

    More soon please?
    June 16th, 2011 at 11:37am
  • crescendo.

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    I love that! I'm bi, but straight stuff gives me the heebie jeebies.
    And I've wanted to see Brokeback Mountain. Is it good? If you like that, have you seen Shelter?
    Oh, and I would totally read a Jake/Heath slash. Awesome idea.
    June 16th, 2011 at 05:10am
  • breakinreality

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    geof ish likin levi betta(: so cayoootttt. :D
    June 16th, 2011 at 04:22am
  • sourwolf.

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    oh Geof. such an interesting character.
    you should do that one shot with Heath and Jake.
    i'd read it. i think they do look kinda cute together :3
    especially in the movie.
    oh dood. reply to my comment. forgot about me already? >.>
    see, i told you it's you who never writes back.

    can't wait 'til the next update! :D

    <3
    June 16th, 2011 at 03:24am
  • Tattoo

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    Awww :D
    I love these two characters so much!
    Thanks for updating <3
    June 16th, 2011 at 02:01am
  • Nytestalker

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    You know, buying Levi all this sugar will not help with the hyperness 'problem'.
    And I'd love a Jake/Heath oneshot.
    That movie is hella sad, I concur.
    June 16th, 2011 at 01:36am
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    I seriously can’t believe that he’s studying to be an architect. He can’t even stack three paper cups together. I am deeply worried about our buildings in the near future.

    I loved Geoffyey's mind.
    xD

    OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD.
    The last sentense --> Levi smiles slightly. “It’s okay. You just have bad road rage.” And then hugs me sideways.

    I READ IT SO WRONG.
    I'm used to like, the weird slash and I read it like,
    "It's okay. You just have bad road rage." And then fucks me sideways.

    LMFAO.
    But yeah, I think Levi will share. ;D
    June 16th, 2011 at 12:53am
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    Oh my God, the grouchy douche bag knows how to say sorry? -gasp- even if he did sound a little awkward when he did. Its a little plus. I'm startin to believe he's bipolar o.o
    Awww Levi is soo cute. <3
    June 16th, 2011 at 12:33am
  • eric halvorsen

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    I kind of imagine Levi like a little kid who'll attach himself to Geoffrey's leg and won't let go, I can so imagine him doing something like that. This story always make me smile, just because their personalities clash so much.

    Moreeeeee... pretty please?
    June 16th, 2011 at 12:32am
  • eric halvorsen

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    I kind of imagine Levi like a little kid who'll attach himself to Geoffrey's leg and won't let go, I can so imagine him doing something like that. This story always make me smile, just because their personalities clash so much.

    Moreeeeee... pretty please?
    June 16th, 2011 at 12:32am
  • havoc's panic

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    Haha love the road rage XD I do that when I drive, too. It's the reason I don't have my full license yet... Because apparently, honking and yelling isn't the appropriate reaction when some jack hole almost kills you... Lol

    Also, if you're looking for good movies, watch the new X-Men. There is SO MUCH gay sexual tension. It inspired slash writers globally. XD

    Anywho, I can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully it'll be longer. ^.^
    June 16th, 2011 at 12:28am
  • moonyandpadfoot

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    I like this so much :3
    June 13th, 2011 at 10:53pm
  • poisongirl24

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    So this is fucking adorable and I do believe that you need to update... Now... I'm serious.
    May 28th, 2011 at 12:33am
  • havoc's panic

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    As we say in French, l'awww (we don't, really, but that's beside the point XD).

    I dunno if this will help you, but whenever my grades start to slip, I don't let myself write until after I get an 80% on the next test. It slows down updates, of course, but it's a good motivator. :P
    May 17th, 2011 at 10:25pm
  • Key to Loneliness

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    Aaaawwwwweee I love Levi!!! I just want to hug him!
    May 17th, 2011 at 10:02pm
  • revengefulvampire

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    Haha yeah kinda lucky ;P
    And yeah, i feel bad for Levi, he's so cute, how can Geoffry be a meany to him?!

    More soon please? :D
    May 17th, 2011 at 08:12pm
  • No Tomorrow

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    "I still love you, even if you don’t like me or you don’t want to even know me."

    That made me sad :(
    I hope Geoffrey lightens up on Levi :(
    can't wait for the next chapter!
    May 17th, 2011 at 03:50pm
  • octoberlover_1014

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    Haha this is cute! Can't wait for geoffrey to accept his cuteness lol .. Update soon!
    May 17th, 2011 at 03:12pm