The Art of Losing Control - Comments

im re reading this since 10 months ago, please update :-(

Please update soon

@ onlyembersleft
Ohh, okay I see! Thank you so much for explaining; would've been awful if I had gone on thinking he hadn't done it (aha that is so true).

Yeah, exactly; I understand what you mean. Very true, she's a very strong character.

Ohhhh I knew itttt. ;)

@ BecauseSheSaidSo
hi hi :) thank you for reading. just wanted to clarify something: Liv wasn't having a dream, she was having a flashback. Andrew actually did set up a whole romantic bath for her (minus the flower petals but he ran out of time and also he probably would've felt bad killing some flowers just to be stepped on because come on it's Andrew). Meyana just snapped her out of it before she could finish the whole memory.

speaking of Meyana, that's how i feel, and that's why i like writing her. she's a young adult who has it all figured out, and nothing she says comes without a smidgen of wisdom. when it comes to giving teenagers advice she's like one of those "cool" moms, you know? everything action is either too protective or too low-key, and either way it can be rather humiliating to be on the receiving end.

as for her history with Andrew... no spoilers, but let's just say they have some unresolved issues ;)

Oh my Lord, oh my fucking hell. he put candles he put fucking candles and flower petals in the bathroom. I am a mess. Oh. It was a dream. Well.
I'm feeling Lindrew, but maybe that's just me. I am excited for sexytimes, not gonna lie. Meyana seems like she means well, but I feel like it's a bit excessive. I understand her, but at the same time I feel like it's so in her face that maybe Meyana has had some past with Andrew? I don't know, just a hunch. Can't wait for the next update! xx

eek! i was honestly so surprised and excited to get an email saying this had been updated because i haven't been on mibba in as long as i can remember. but gosh, i love this story! <3

eek! i was honestly so surprised and excited to get an email saying this had been updated because i haven't been on mibba in as long as i can remember. but gosh, i love this story! <3

Oh m'Lord this writing is so fantastic; I am so glad I stumbled upon this. Well not really stumbling upon, I guess. I got nostalgic and started listening to MGMT again this week. Needless to say, I got nostalgic about VanWyngarden. I would love to see an update soon, but take your time. Quality over quantity. xx

please update asap

This chapter was just the bees knees. I really like the character development and Liv and Andrew are super. I'm bad at writing comments. But I'm glad you came back for this story.

GOD FUCKING BLESS YOU. god fucking bless you. seriously. may the angels rain hot donuts down upon you like heveanly halos and may you have eternal life filled with dogs and never get stuck in line at the dmv again. may no ugly-ass fuckboy continually hit on you. may no toes of yours ever land on legos or any of that bullshit ever again because sweet baby jesus christ on a stick this story is a golden lamb of god. when i asked the a lord for a story involving a girl fucking andrew vanwyngarden, the pussy-worthy adonis that has made my genitals tingle for years, i did not think i was worthy of a glory such as this. and now i must have some good karma by all the stuff i recycled because it has been updated twice in a month. blessed dicks rain upon me. this story is like if morgan freeman's voice had sex with beyonce and they made the exact sex story i wanted to hear. i've read a lot of sexy band member fanfiction and this, this is the best one i've come across. period. if i ever meet u in the streets i am buying you all the pasta and lap dances you deserve because by god, you've earned it woman. my only request: please feature his dick in more. thank you. godspeed.

GOD FUCKING BLESS YOU. god fucking bless you. seriously. may the angels rain hot donuts down upon you like heveanly halos and may you have eternal life filled with dogs and never get stuck in line at the dmv again. may no ugly-ass fuckboy continually hit on you. may no toes of yours ever land on legos or any of that bullshit ever again because sweet baby jesus christ on a stick this story is a golden lamb of god. when i asked the a lord for a story involving a girl fucking andrew vanwyngarden, the pussy-worthy adonis that has made my genitals tingle for years, i did not think i was worthy of a glory such as this. and now i must have some good karma by all the stuff i recycled because it has been updated twice in a month. blessed dicks rain upon me. this story is like if morgan freeman's voice had sex with beyonce and they made the exact sex story i wanted to hear. i've read a lot of sexy band member fanfiction and this, this is the best one i've come across. period. if i ever meet u in the streets i am buying you all the pasta and lap dances you deserve because by god, you've earned it woman. my only request: please feature his dick in more. thank you. godspeed.

great chapter!

words cannot express how disappointed i am that this hasn't been updated in so long. god, i have about a thousand and one things to say about this story and how absolutely wonderful it is, but it's 3 am and my mind is keeping it all away from me. just know that you write beautifully and i love the way you've characterized andrew. holy hell that was so lame. c'mon man, please update. i need to hear ben say some words almost as much as i need to see andrew and liv finally get together. pleasepleasepleaseplease

WHENS THE NEXT CHAPTER HAPPENING??

there arent many andrew fics so please write more!! this is the best one ive read

yeah pleeeeeeeeease write more! this is awesome and really well written! X

yeah pleeeeeeeeease write more! this is awesome and really well written! X

Please make more? :)

great :)