The Art of Losing Control - Comments

I'm excited and ready for what they come up with and have been working so hard on. I like how they have meaning to their lyrics, but what gets me is the music. It's so good you feel the music just to a gateway to free spirit. I value music that its important how I feel listening to it and the positive openness it creates. One song new was a tease, but just builds anticipation. I'm excited for the new album. What about you?

We'll that awesomeness! Can't wait to read it when you post it.

Sorry.. I actually found this site because I was searching MGMT's new album release, but no luck. But when I got steered here from Google I got all the Andrew themed stories, I thought they were the same author because Andrew's personality is almost the same.

I liked the ending its an honest story. I started reading your shorts, only a little disappointed since some of the stories aren't yet finished. I had an idea to share, if i may. Can you make up a story where he meets a "real" female, one who knows how real life can be, because of experiences, not like other girls who live in a fantasy world and selfishness. I mean familiar to stoned days weed is a "prospect improver", if the person can mature and learn from negative and turn it into positive. I don't mean to be disrespectful in any way, just curious how he would be older. You have great writings . . . .

Wow,it's pretty damn good! Update more and you'll make a happy person out of me.

please update!! this is awesome!

Doh! Checking back, no luck.

So glad you came back! I love the chapter; you had me cracking up. And for the reader who is not familiar with Andrew or Mgmt, just YouTube them. Especially the many faces and words of Andrew VanWyngarden. Love. Anyway, back to you, awesome writer, can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Okay, two things: One, it's been since I last posted a comment that I have read this story, and it's been on my mind every once in a while since! I just loved your writing style and sometimes I would think about it out of nowhere and just wonder if you've updated (I'm NEVER on mibba, jsyk) and I finally decided to check and BAM you have six chapters and I got all excited about it.
And two, “How's that for bullshit? I'm sitting here trying to court you with my two-step, and you think Lucifer is sending me into anaphylactic shock.” I probably laughed at this way harder than necessary. You have such a way with humor in your writing, it's just perfect! Definitely the kind of humor I (as I'm sure others as well) can relate to and I just LOVE it. I'll be back soon to check up for some more updates, can't wait to see what you've got cookin' ;)

I was so thrilled to see an update to this! Andrew is adorable and you portray him just the way that I imagine he would be. Perfection! Can't wait for more :)

Gotta say, I agree with all of the above. The way you write Andrew seems spot on and I am definitely HOOKED! Patiently waiting for an update.

This is really well written! I am not familiar with the characters at all but I think you capture their personalities absolutely fantastically to the point where I don't have to know much else about them all in advance, which takes skill! I absolutely adore the layout too - I know how hard it is to make them sometimes :) Also, the colour scheme is really well fitting with the story content... It's all about the aesthetics! Xx

This story is soo good! Please update it, I wanna know what happens next!

ANDREW VANWYNGARDEN FANFICTION FTW! This story is amazing. Seriously. Post a new chapter soon? :)

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY. I LOVE IT!

I really, really like this story! There aren't many stories that actually have a nice flow and includes Andrew at the same time. Also, I think your portrayal of Andrew is perfect! :)
I can't wait to see how the next chapter is going to go!

I'm so excited to see where this is gonna go!! :DDD

You're a talented writer! This story is amazing. (: Hopefully you keep it up. I love how you write Liv and I did notice that Ben hadn't said anything haha.

Oh my gosh! Green bell-bottoms? That made me chuckle. :) Great update!!

I can't wait for more! Please update with new stuff soon?

yeah, this is really great, its about time someone makes a good and readable Andrew story c: