The Art of Losing Control - Comments

  • AerophaneSorceress

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    It makes me sad to see hat this was posted so long ago.this has potential to be a really great story.I do hope you continue to write it. :)
    August 13th, 2011 at 06:14am
  • therapeutic smile.

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    I really like your writing style. I think this story has potential, and you should definitely continue it! (:
    May 31st, 2011 at 05:40am
  • Dud:3

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    I really like the start of it, I hope you continue and you're an awsome writer. I can never write the first chapter to a point where I'm happy with it, but you did great. :)
    April 8th, 2011 at 08:51am