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I don't care what Zacky says, he is totally trying to control her life! All he does is tell her what she can and cannot do! I love Zacky and all but he's not her parent and he needs to loosen the reigns for gods sake! She's 23! Anyway, even though I do enjoy the lovey dovey relationship between haylee and Brian, this scene was perfect and played out just like it should have been. Once again, calm it down there Zacky, take a deep breath, but he totally better not have kicked her out or there will be hell to pay. Brian gets perfect boyfriend points and this is my favorite story EVER and I lose my mind whenever it updates, so update quick! Great chapter!

Zacky was a dick. I knew he was going to flip out but he was a dick to her. I really hope he didn't mean what he said about not coming back home.

Cant wait for another update!! Ahh this one was intense, but expected

This was an amazing update! So many things happened so fast.

I expected Zack to react like that initially. I know time and space will help him realize that both Haylee and Brian are really serious about each other.

Also, I doubt Zack meant that Haylee shouldn't go home again. Of course, the way Haylee tried to explain things wasn't the best way. Then again, I give her props for trying considering she was caught off guard. I also don't think Haylee meant that Zack was trying to control her life. It was the wrong word. I feel that she meant that he was just being too overprotective at times when he should try and back off a bit. Older brothers can be difficult to understand at times though.

Looking forward to the next update!!!

I loved the update! Great job! I love how you write your characters and I can't wait to find out what happens next. I honestly don't think Zack meant it when he told Haylee not to come back home. I'll be waiting for the next update to see if I'm right. :)

Great update!

I still love this chapter, as you very well know. It still makes me so sad that Zacky and Haley say such hurtful things to each other though.

Loved the update dear!

It was a long time coming :( it's still a little upsetting. Great update

Every now and then you come across a story whose plot makes you ask, "Why didn't I think of that?" For me, this story has been one of those from the start. But at the same time, I'm glad it was you who came up with the idea - because your writing style is perfect for it, and I'm loving every single chapter.

I didn't see this coming at all. I mean, sure, I expected the fight between Zacky and Brian - but for Zacky to do that to his own sister? But after the things that she said, and the way that she hurt him, I can understand where he's coming from. I spent the chapter trying to figure out whose side I was on. I'm still undecided.

Ugh, I love this!

So obviously, she's going to stay with Brian now, right? He'll take care of her until things between her and Zacky are okay again. He wouldn't be much of a man if he didn't.

I don't even know what else to say. This story is still amazing. <3

This is so well written, very well done to you! I can't wait to read more.

AHHH! Way to go Zacky, ruining this moment for me! Update soon please!

oh my god they're in sooo much shit!

I literally said "uh uh" out loud. This is gonna be a very interesting conversation. They should learn how to lock the doors when they are alone. And she did well in telling Brian about Trevor :) I can't wait to read more!!!!!! :D

hey I like your new layout :D

Ahh was not expecting that!! really hope zack understands haha. shits about to go DOWN

HOLY MOLEY IT'S ZACKY. I was so not expecting him to show up at the end of the chapter like that, although I kind of had the sense that SOMEONE might just walk in on them getting all hot and heavy in the kitchen since you made a point of saying that Brian always kept his door unlocked.

TREVOR. OMG. Can we say creeper? I was literally getting so tense and scared for Haylee when he was talking to her because of the brilliant way you described the situation. It was just perfect. I felt like holding my breath throughout that little encounter, half expecting something bad to happen to her.

AND BRIAN. Well, what is there to say about sweet, sweet Brian? He's that awesome mixture of caring, concerned and protective boyfriend. I think we all need a man like him in our lives. I love how he was worried about her having not eaten anything and was prepared to fix Haylee something for dinner and then got super annoyed to find out that this Trevor guy had made her feel very uncomfortable. I HOPE BRIAN KICKS HIS ASS.

Not to mention the sexy times in the kitchen were AMAZING even if they were interrupted. I was getting all hot under the collar just reading it lol.

UPDATE AGAIN SOON PLEASE. I NEED TO KNOW MORRRRRE.

Love this story btw... :)

ZACKY, WHAT? oh my lord. this ought to be a reason not to just talk into someone's place without knocking, possibly? so she puts off telling him for a bit, and he ends up finding out like this? oh, yikes...

I definitely get the feeling this appearance of Trevor may be a reference, or even a bit of foreshadowing for the prologue. I don't trust that guy one bit.

Hot damn! Zacky knows!! I have no idea why he's there anyway, but damn!

Trevor is definitely a creeper. I don't like him one bit.

So looking forward to reading more!!!

Oooh Zacky, here we go. I'm just mentally preparing myself now to think he's a total ass in the next chapter. He's going to say something stupid, I know he is. Because that's the kind of person he is.

And I cannot get over how damn cute Haylie and Brian are. Fucking adorable, going to give me a cavity.