Wow I love how much emotion is in the first chapter! I mean when I got done I felt like crying because she feels so alone after what happened to her. Man when her brother and the others find out they are going to flip out!!!! I feel sorry for that man because once they find him, he is going to be in a world of pain!!!!! I look forward to the next update and hope it'll be soon! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
You already know how much I love this, I don't think it's THAT necessary for me to tell you. that and I'm a bit worried the library's porn filters are going to go off again. :) Loved it dear!
This story is going to be epic. Damn straight you should already have subscribers after 15 mins. It's that awesome. Can't wait to read the rest of it! <3
I can't help but already feel rather saddened by this story = ( Having said that, I LOVE IT!! Yup, already. I love it already!! And I can't wait for more ducky!!! Awesomeness on a page right here!! x
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