Catalyst - Comments

OH HOLY MOLY!!!!!!!! They were all caught up in their fondling and their smooching...and look where that got them?? As Janet once sang "there was no use getting, into heavy petting, it only leads to trouble..." and it's all true!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR ZACKY'S REACTION!! I think it's going to be amazing :)

Brian is just...well there are no words. The way you have written him in this story, he's just adorable. Bless him!! Making sure she eats, getting all protective, getting all handsy ;) it's what you want in a guy really isn't it?? Dream man right here people!!!

I CAN'T WAIT for the next chapter. I am literally going to just stare at my computer until an update happens...I may get fired...be that on your head :P

x x x

Oh fuck! Shits about to hit the fan! I can't wait to read what happens next! xD

...you'd better not take forever to update this time. Because OMG, WHAT THE HELL IS ZACKY DOING THERE!?

Trevor creeps me out. He seriously does. And remembering the prologue for this story (I think it was this story), maybe there's a good reason for that.

Brian is adorable though, the way he cares about her so much - not even the over protective boyfriend part, but the part about making her eat after work. ;) I wish I had a man like that.

Can't wait for more!

DUN DUN DUUUUUN!

Oh shit, the cat is most definitely out of the bag now! I think Zacky is going to go absolutely mental at them! He will kick Brian's ass for sure and probably try and locl Haylee up forever! Haha. Had they have gone to him and told him about their relationship, he may have been okay with it. He would have shouted and probably tried to hit Brian but him finding them together, he is going to blow a gasket! Poor Haylee and Brian D:

And, I have a bad feeling about this Trevor fella, I don't think he's just going to go away so easily. Which can only mean bad news for Haylee!

I absolutely love the way you write Brian, he's just all round made of UNNFF haha.

Great chapter :D

More soon, please please please! XD

You know what Andrea! Be nice and do this for your coworker. AND TREVOR MAYBE YOU SHOULD BACK OFF.
I love this chapter so much oh my god. Brian and Haylee's relationship is like my favorite! And Zacky as the end oh snap. Stuff is gonna happen and it is not going to be pretty!
I LOVE IT!

Oh my god if I had friends like that relentlessly pressing me for details on my sex life I think I'd deck the lot of them lol.

Oh damn, she's gonna have to tell Zacky sooner rather than later and he is gonna have the bitch fit to end all bitch fits. I can so picture him doing like Haylee said and trying to turn the house into Fort Knox and trying to lock her in her room.

I've just sat down and read all 26 chapters and I love it! I love the way you write Brian, so cocky and self assured but deep down he's so sweet and caring, especially towards Haylee. I love their friendship and now their relationship, they're just so perfect for each other!

Zacky..Oh Zack, I know you're the big brother but really? He seems a little too over protective sometimes but I can see his heart is in the right place. I wanted to punch the other girls a few times, quit asking about Haylee's love life for god sake haha.

I'm excited but nervous to see how Zack is gonna take the news, especially knowing that most of the group know about them already! XD I love the little flirtatious glances, Brian lingering too long as he kisses her cheek, OOF and the sex! HAWT!

Can't wait for more! :D

I feel like a crazy fly rubbing its hands together for the next update. So much detail, I love it.

Loved the update

300TH COMMENT!!!!!

Aw it was too cute how Haylee was stressing over what to wear to Brian's house even though they were just chilling out. I also really loved how she was basically just speechless when his eyes lock onto hers and then he just kisses her without saying anything. THAT'S LOVE RIGHT THERE. MHMM.
OMG THE PORN SCENE. Wow. Trust Brian to watch it, not so he can get off, but just so he can critique the whole damn thing. Massive lols to be had right there. XD
And Hales' little freak out at the end was adorable and understandable. It's awesome that Brian finds her special enough to want to wait it out until she's completely ready.

LOL. THE SANDWICH COMMENT. Loved it.
Aww, Haylee just can't catch a break with her friends lol... always teasing her and the lack of her sex life with Brian. Poor girl. xD I loved the "Just climb up on top of him" line though. So classic lol... and the "semi virginal" comment.
I just loved the little talk at the end where Haylee needed reassurance about Brian and she got honest answers from the girls about how Brian doesn't necessarily NEED sex, it was just convenient to him before so he won't mind waiting. It was sweet. Then the chat about finally telling Zacky. OMG. I can not wait to see how that chapter goes down. It is going to be EPIC.

oh lord, I can see zack's reaction in my head now. zacky is definitely quite the whiner and a bit of a drama queen in this story haha... should be pretty interesting! i would be scared too, but she definitely has to tell him. and the sooner the better, i think. before things really start getting serious.

i've seemed to have missed two chapters! a nice surprise but alksjdgkjsdglsag i love this story. well before chapter. gosh they are so cute and brian is so silly. i think watching a sex scene with anyone can be some what awkward, especially if someone walks in on one and its like O_O anyhoo! its SO cute that he will wait and is not pushing her or anything *sighs* so glad they are together! & this chapter, i love the relationship with the girls such friendship at its finest and funniest. oh man i wish i could open up my word document and find a finished chapter i forgot about. that would be christmas for sure! well im glad you update & i cant wait to find out how zacky is going to react! :D keep going! this story is just perfect! oh and i miss you <3

I really want to see Zack's reaction to this!

LOVED IT!!!

It wouldn't surprise me that the girls would refuse to drop it. Quite insistent bunch :D tee hee.

I love this story so much so I was very excited when I saw that you had updated it!! I simply cannot wait for more :) I especially cannot wait for Zacky's reaction. I feel like that is just going to be wonderful!! x

You forgot about this chapter? How did you manage that? Silly woman.

I loved it though, just as much a I did the first time around! :)

Jesus, those girls sound like the most obnoxious group ever.

I absolutely loved this update! The awkwardness and embarrassed feelings that Haylee has when the sex topic is brought up. Love it!!! I'm looking forward to reading about Zacky's reaction when he finds out. That should be an epic chapter to read. This story is amazing and I love it. I was super stoked to find out that it had been updated. Looking forward to reading more soon!

vv I love how awkward she got talking about sex, too. XD One of my friends used to talk about sex around me all the time and it made me really squirmy, but now... Now she can talk about it all she likes. But I tend not to join. =P

I can't wait to see what happens when Zacky finds out. It's just going to be so amusing.

Great to finally get an update!

I love how awkward she gets when there is talks about sex! I was laughing this entire chapter with everyone's eagerness to discuss all the gory details of a sex life that isn't quite there yet haha. I just love this story and this chapter was amazing! AMAZING!!
I loved it! <333

hahaha I love how squirmy she got during the whole porn thing and yeah watching them with someone else can be a bit funny and awkward.

Damn woman are you trying to self combust me today? :p