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  • buried_alive.

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    AHHH YOU TEASE!!
    now i feel the need to bribe you again cause i wasnt ready for that to end yet. :(
    MORE, MORE, MORE!!!
    September 11th, 2011 at 06:22pm
  • hachie

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    Aw she definitely inherited the Baker's stomach!
    She ate until she felt she was going to burst when they had breakfast and when someone mentioned lunch, she immediately gets hunger again!!!!!
    So cute!
    Another trait that Brian loves about her.
    Brian probably wanted to spend the whole day with her but the girls had other plans for her!
    And they kiss again!!!!!!!!
    I look forward to the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    September 11th, 2011 at 05:57pm
  • hmc09

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    this story is seriously reeeally good, please update asap :)
    September 11th, 2011 at 02:45pm
  • doodlestrudle

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    I have to say that of all the A7x fanfic's I've read your's is in my top 2. You writing draws a reader into the characters and already all of your readers are emotionally attached to Haylee, and of course Brian. The dynamic between them is great and the back story has definitely prevented readers from feeling that the plot has been progressing too quickly. I look forward to the rest of the story!
    September 11th, 2011 at 10:52am
  • Leaving Memories

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    So I started reading this and I got hooked right away! I love it!

    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
    September 11th, 2011 at 04:31am
  • buried_alive.

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    lyndsey dear, im in love with this story.
    you should update it ASAP. :)
    September 5th, 2011 at 02:46am
  • gipsy danger.

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    I LOVED Brian's point of view! It's so fun knowing what he thinks. And the boy needs to man up, grow some balls, pull up his big boy panties and tell Haylee how he feels.
    The chapter was absolutely adorable!
    August 31st, 2011 at 01:24am
  • BlackAshes

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    Omg! You should do brains pov more often cause a) your friggen good at it and b) I love being in his head! He's so in love with haylee, it's ridiculously cute! More sooooooooon!
    August 28th, 2011 at 11:04am
  • dacastardust

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    Okay if things don't go well I will cut a bitch
    I am in love with this story ahsgd;akjdhasgfasl
    August 25th, 2011 at 01:27pm
  • ladyofsorrows101

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    Great update!
    I really liked that you did it in Brian's point of view.
    We finally get to see what is going on in his head.
    I can't believe that Brian and Haylee have been slept together 3 times and they haven't admitted their feelings for each other.
    He really needs to tell her how he feels before it's too late and someone snatches her away again.
    If Brian does tell her how he feels, I hope that Haylee doesn't run away from it.
    Both of them are meant to be together, no matter what Zacky or any anyone else says.
    Can't wait for the next update!!!
    August 24th, 2011 at 08:56pm
  • hmc09

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    love this story!
    August 23rd, 2011 at 12:51pm
  • YourMomOnSteroids

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    TELL BRIAN TO BE THE SEX PANTHER WE ALL KNOW HE IS INSTEAD OF PUTZING AROUND THE BUSH!
    Muahahahahaaa... yes.... I DID just say that. Both of our Brians need to man up.
    This story is delicious by the way. Even more delicious than peppermint tea and chocolate chip pancakes <3
    August 23rd, 2011 at 07:38am
  • Call The Angels

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    Brian is just too damn sweet in this, seriously. And I hate that you're so damn good at doing a man's point of view when I suck at them so bad. Jealous. Loved the update dear!
    August 23rd, 2011 at 05:08am
  • x.Kris.x

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    I love Sexface's point of view. It's always so entertaining. When are you going to make it appropriately dirty htough? I can't be the only one waiting for it to happen :P I'm going to pester you to keep writing now lol. But I love this one. The socks monologue just makes my night.

    Hurry up and update again woman! <3
    August 23rd, 2011 at 03:55am
  • hachie

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    So they did sleep with each other!
    More than once that night, since Brian did say that he was first, second and then third!
    So that is one big secret that she and Brian are hiding from her older family and everyone.
    I very much enjoyed reading this chapter because we got to read from Brian's POV and he is deeply in love with Haylee!!!!!
    For almost four years now!
    And now he is going to tell her how he wants to be more than friends and that he loves her.
    I cannot wait for him to confess his feelings and then have Zacky go apeshit! LOL
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    August 23rd, 2011 at 03:34am
  • x-LozziePop-x

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    Aww I love Brian and Haylee...they seem like such a perfect couple :) x
    August 23rd, 2011 at 02:02am
  • dacastardust

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    I need more okay just sayin
    August 3rd, 2011 at 10:52pm
  • YourMomOnSteroids

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    Mmmmm he wants to nom nom nom on those leggies of hersssss, I can feeeel it!!!

    <3
    August 3rd, 2011 at 05:19am
  • HeartFailure

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    The next chapter will make up for it?? Woot!! Tee hee. Better post that quick smart, missy.
    Loved the chapter!! Brian is just a big goofball!!
    Can't wait for more!! x
    August 1st, 2011 at 08:48am
  • ladyofsorrows101

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    Great update!
    I love how Zacky begrudgingly had to let Haylee go to Brian's house.
    Brian's reaction to Haylee's pajamas was so funny!
    I can't wait to see what happens next.
    Update soon!!!
    August 1st, 2011 at 06:08am
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