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So Haylee was already expecting Zacky to throw a fit when she agreed to spend the night at Brian's.
Man I really loved the last chapter!
Zacky just as Brian put his foot in his mouth!
And Pinkly loves her too since the dog was excited to see Haylee!
LOL the comment about her brother made me laugh so hard!
Damn she is one smart cookie!
Brian almost freaking out on what she was wearing just made my night since he seemed to have got aroused by the way she dressed
I am so excited for the next chapter!
This was pretty short chapter but I enjoyed nonetheless!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Who wears short shorts??
Lee wears short shorts!
... Until Brian takes them off. :P

i absolutely love this story! i want haylee to get with brian and get married and live happily ever after! that would be so cute

Oh my gosh I loved the chapter! It doesn't matter if it was short! It was perfect! Brian was adorable and how he couldn't keep his eyes off her legs. He totally wants her haha. Absolutely adorable! I love Brian and Haylee, they are perfect! I can't wait for the next chapter! <3

i loved this one and i'm totally not mad that it was short 'cause brian made up for it by being super cute! loved when he said, 'what the fuck are you wearing?' when he saw her jammies. that actually made me LOL. can't wait for the next onee!

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bahahaha i love the ending. sooo funny!

the beginning of the flashback was soo sad only 'cause it's true: guys like trevor do exist, unfortunately.

i looove haylee's relationship with brian. i loved how annoyingly persistent he was with her when he was trying to get her to open up to him.

and p.s, if you didn't know already, you're a bloody tease! with the end of the flashback. with you, i don't know if they actually went through with it 'cause it totally seems like they did but then again, it's you that's writing it and YOU ARE A NOTORIOUS TEASE!

:D still love you though.

MORE!

Oh Zacky, you silly, silly boy!! That ending did have me in giggles!! In fact the whole bit with Zacky did. Mostly because of your love of having him stuffing his face in almost all your stories!! Poor boy just can't get away from your teasing of his love for food!! Hee hee.

I LOVED THE CHAPTER!! Mhm, yes I did. You are a bit of a tease what with the flashback ending where it did, but you know what?? I'mma forgive you for two reasons; 1) I love you oh so much =D and 2) because I have a feeling that you are going to make up for it soon...and when I say I have a feeling...that feeling is mostly prayers and wishes =D

Can't wait for more ducky!! <3

just come across this sotry and read all 5 chapter, reeeaally good :) and I love the long chapters!

I recently just fell in love with your story. You are an amazing writer&&I cant wait to read more, so update soon,please.

Mmmmmmm....what a lovely little flashback ^__^ om nom nom.
And Zacky's in trouuubleeeee bahaha I can't wait to see him get torn a new asshole :P
Loved the update and I can't wait for more!

D: can't believe he forgot her birthday!! D:
more please!!

Such a long chapter but I loved it so much!! Brian and Haylee are just perfect for each other! I lvoe them! Stupid Trevor, he needs a nice swift kick in the genitals.
And oh fuck, Zacky forgot her birthday. I would beat him up! Just rip him to pieces and kick him out of the house. Jerk! But I love how protective he is of his sister!
I can't wait for the next update!! <33

This chapter was really fucking long... but I fucking love it!!! ^_^
Zacky forgot about her birthday!!!! Oh shit! Oh shit!!
Hahahahahahaha I can't fucking wait to read the next chapter but until then... ^_^

I really enjoyed the first couple of chapters of this story so far.
I can't wait to see the hell that is going to be unleashed on Zacky for forgetting Haylee's birthday!!
Thanks for the read.
Update soon please :)

brb just DYING OVER THIS CHAPTER
WOMAN!! THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL

You cock tease.
YOU STOPPED THE MEMORY AT THE GOOD PART!
Jerk.
Uh oh.... Zacky forgot her birthday! Not good!
Loved it. :)

Great update!
I feel sorry for Haylee and her bad luck with men.
Trevor was an asshole and sadly that's how most men are.
I loved her whole rant to Brian and everything lol
It was so funny how Zacky forgot her birthday!
I can't believe he actually forgot, but maybe Haylee can use that as blackmail to be able to spend the night at Brian's house.
Really loved the update and I can't wait to read more!!!

This made me laugh so hard!
I mean I'm not saying that Haylee getting her heart broken by an asshole that deserves to be castrated.
And then Haylee ranting on how she should just got to a bar and just have some guy pick her up but then Brian got really upset and told her otherwise.
Then their make out started! It sucked though that it ended there and I am dying to know whether or not Brian and Haylee went all the way or something caused them to stop.
OMG I can't stop laughing right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I mean Zacky is going all brother mode when he finds out that Haylee is spending the night at Brian, then he is reminded that it's also birthday that coming weekend.
Man he is in the dog house with his sister now!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ugh you write so well.
lovelovelovelovelovelovelove!

I can't wait for the next bit. It's going to be even better :D