Catalyst - Comments

hahaha I love how squirmy she got during the whole porn thing and yeah watching them with someone else can be a bit funny and awkward.

Damn woman are you trying to self combust me today? :p

i laughed through the whole porn part. Couldn't help it. Watching porn with someone else is just so awkward, yet funny. Watching it with someone you're dating/interested in is even worse.
And I think Brian worked pretty hard to prove the point that there is some control involved in sex, the little shit. Well... probably not necessarily little... but you know what I mean. ;)
Man, what is it with you and posting steamy chapters today? haha.
Loved it. :)

AHHH, so worth the wait!

nope, watching porn with the guy you've liked your whole life isn't awkward at all. and then brian, what a clever tease... making it so she can't even think to counter her "sex is more than control" argument. good thing he's a sweetheart. but I definitely think haylee is right to not rush things. they've been friends for so long, the worse thing they could do is go too fast too soon and jeopardize it.

Super duper duper cute update!! I really liked this chapter, can't wait for the next update :)

This chapter was so good! I love this story and I'm always looking forward to reading more. Brian is a sweetheart. The sex critiquing was just hilarious too. Great update! Waiting as patiently as I can for more. :)

Great chapter! Brian is so sweet!

Brian and Haylee are my favorite, that's just it. I love them together and Brian is such a mega sweetheart. He just understands and it's all so perfect.

That scene critiquing the sex will alwyas be my favorite. I am still laughing over it! <33

oh this was great xD ahaha I think it was funny really :) awwn and brian was cutee

I genuinely adore Brian in this story. He is so sweet and understanding and adorable and cute and...why don't I know any guys like that in real life?? :( sad times!!

But on a happier note, LOVED THE CHAPTER!! It was so sweet and fun. I can't wait for more :) x

I absolutely adored this chapter - from the chatting with her friend at the start, to the way she felt bad about leaving Icky alone, to the way that Brian reacted in the end. In this story, he is the PERFECT boyfriend. I want one. ^_^

I also love that she was freaking out over what to wear, even though it wasn't all that big a deal. =P

Guess there's not much else to say, except that as per usual I loved the writing style and everything that happened. And as an added bonus, Mibba actually emailed me on time when you updated! =D

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY! :D This is such a great story. Can't wait to read more:)

cant wait for another update!

You have a wonderful way of capturing the relationship between the guys. The banter between them did nothing but crack me up. I literally LOL'ed and feared that I would start to ROFL!! :D

I loved this chapter, as always, and I love this story in general!! Lots of love for your writing and for you. I simply cannot wait for more!! :D x

hahahaha the guys around the table was absolutely hilarious. Johnny is such a little shit. I literally laughed out loud about Matt, Zacky and Brian hulking the fuck out lol

oh lord Johnny is a dead man hahahahahaha

oh my god I have laughed so much during this chapter I'm nearly in tears. I just read "pipe down pudgy"and nearly snorted coke out of my nose :D

I love the song choice, and I think Nikki picked it just for Haylee and Brian.

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I heard a lot of people didn't get notifications about the update at all. Lately I've been getting multiple notifications for each update. I don't know what's going on but I hope it clears up soon. Sorry, though!

Did anyone get the same chapter three times? :(

THIS WAS AWESOME!!!! Loved the text messages. They were great. Loved the whole chapter. It was just awesome. So looking forward to more with this story!!!

Very cute chapter, I loved all the banter!! :) can't wait for the next update

ahaha omg this was hilariooooooouuuuusss!!! I loved it! no doubt about it! so glad you updated ^^ awesome