Sweet Illusions - Comments

I've been super busy lately, so I'm just now getting caught up, but I would definitely read a Kennedy story! Haha on Mibba while intoxicated..WOO! xD
& John is being sweet & pretty sure he's changed..but who knows

Lmao. I love you being on Mibba whilst you're intoxicated!
And I seriously loved this chapter!
Jared makes me giggle!
And the end with John showing off his new shoes totally made me laugh out loud. :P
I can't wait to see what their day together entails! :)

oh boy hahahah. that's what i have to say about both story and being on mibba while being intoxicated.

UPDATE :]

CHAPTER 17 AND IT'S FINALLY GOING TO HAPPEN! BOOOYAH! VFDGUSIJBGRAH I JUST LOVE THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH! Jared is all knowing and isn't afraid to share, and then John likes her and is gonna ask her out and he actually gave her his fruity pebbles and omg I'm so excited for the next chapter!

Hahaa. I loved the little squabble between Kennedy and Madison on the way to the lake house. And oh my God, that last chapter was amazing, boo! I love the way you write, like I could envision that whole scene in my head! And I'm glad that John finally told her how he felt, and Elliot, too, in a way, but now I can only assume that things are going to get way more complicated now! I love this, lady! :)

she's so falling for him.

Yah! Updated :]

This story is so damn cute.
John is just too sweet, but Elliot, I swear to God I will punch her in the face.
He's just too sweet for his own good.
Can't wait for more.
:)

God, I love them. So much so, that I'm already getting nervous about how you're going to fuck them up. I'm trying to prepare myself, but how do you really prepare yourself for heartbreak?

AND I LOVE YOU TOO! I think we're all broke bitches nowadays hahahaha. But omg. They kissed! And John seems really sincere about wanting to be with her! But she still has that damn bet going on where she has to break his heart! SHE NEEDS TO CALL IT OFF HIDFIVCSKJUOIDWJASKNFIJ I WILL CUT A BITCH (NOT YOU, HER) IF SHE DOES NOT CALL IT OFF! John really likes her and is willing to wait! On top of that, it seems like she really likes him too, so I don't see why she shouldn't call it off. But I know she won't. She's gonna break him anyways. fewnajlojawknlef

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHH I'M SORRY FOR COMMENTING SO LATE I WAS ON VACATION BUT I YAM BACK! but omg Elle is getting jealous! and John! He keeps on checking her out! They should just do it and then things will be awkward and then they'll see each other in the building obviously and then that'll be his chance to ask her out! I mean, sure, that's not comfortable at all, but whateverrrrr

XO

haha Elle's feelings are starting to show for John...that's badd...but at least his are showing too..
hmm..no idea what's to come, but I have a feeling it'll be bigg..(:

well that was nice. i feel like the lake would have some nice drama haha.

elliot is playing with fire. you don't shit where you sleep. Glad you updated!! woop woop!!

Yes oh my goodness you cannnot imagine my excitement when I saw you updated. I really like Elliott as a character. Her headstrong attitude is something hard to come by in fan fiction. This story is great and I can't wait for things to get exciting with these new living arrangements! And yes, people still read this. Love it when you update!

I like it when you update haha

Elle's walking into a catastrophe waiting to happen. Lol.
I doubt any good will come from her and John living so close together!
I can't wait for more, love! :)

I feel like Elle is either gonna fuck herself over or fuck John over...either way, it'll be good!
& yes, people still read this..haha(: