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  • Carry On Winchester

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    thank you for the shout out ahha and you're welcome.

    and god john is such an ass. poor logan.
    April 26th, 2011 at 07:15am
  • liar's lane.

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    Update! This is Soooooooo good! (:
    April 24th, 2011 at 08:04pm
  • Carry On Winchester

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    I LOVE THIS OKAY
    YOU MUST LOVE THIS TOO
    PEOPLE MUST COMMENT THIS
    AJKLDFJALDKFJ`
    April 23rd, 2011 at 09:01pm
  • whilethefirewasout

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    I like it! Love it even! Just as much as John will love Elliot! ;)
    April 22nd, 2011 at 12:46am
  • thatswhatshesaid0

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    Hahaha John called her a stripper. I like it. Update soon!
    April 21st, 2011 at 06:06pm
  • beccuh

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    <333333
    update soon!
    April 21st, 2011 at 05:39pm
  • whilethefirewasout

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    I think that this is sweeeeeeeeeeeeet! Haha I could figure out the French stuff, even though I'm only in French 1, but then again I'm the only one in the class who's getting almost an 100. I like how Jared is making John wait before he makes a move. Then again, it doesn't seem like Elliot would care. Not saying that she gets around, I just mean that she doesn't seem like one who would care.
    April 19th, 2011 at 12:05am
  • Carry On Winchester

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    don't be nervous about this story! you are going in the right direction!
    and i could only make out half the french stuff hahaha.
    but i love how kenny and elliot are becoming friends and how right and wise jared is hhaa.
    April 18th, 2011 at 05:11pm
  • roshambo

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    I love this!!
    I actually laughed out loud when Kennedy found out his dad got married.
    Elliot is awesome. She's sassy and sarcastic and completely cool. I think I'm going to really like her. And of course Kennedy is a sweeheart. I'm glad they want to be friends because they could both totally hate each other's guts just because their parents unexpectedly got married.
    And John. Oh boy, what are we going to do with him???? Elliot better teach him a lesson.
    April 18th, 2011 at 08:32am
  • Carry On Winchester

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    akldfjldskjfsakldfj
    so i love this okay.
    and i love elliot. she's my fave
    and poor kenny so shocked poor boy.
    April 17th, 2011 at 08:42am
  • beccuh

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    I like your Easy A reference(;
    I like your story too.
    April 16th, 2011 at 07:59am
  • thatswhatshesaid0

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    Well. John seems like a dick. Haha
    Update soon!
    April 14th, 2011 at 12:10pm
  • whilethefirewasout

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    well, I'll state the blunt truth. Elliot seems like a whore. Girl needs to button up and get somewhat longer shorts! But if something starts with John, then I think it's just gonna be sex, no strings attached. It'll eventually form into something else but Elliot is gonna hurt John? I don't know. Maybe it's too early for my crazy predictions. As for Kennedy, he's just gonna be cold towards his new mom haha.
    April 14th, 2011 at 07:41am
  • Carry On Winchester

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    so i'm excited.
    April 13th, 2011 at 07:25am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    WOO THIS RULES ALREADY!
    April 13th, 2011 at 07:17am
  • thatswhatshesaid0

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    Awesome start!!! Update soon?
    April 12th, 2011 at 08:32am
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