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  • Awkwardly Obscured

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    Update soon! It's by far the best one I have read so far!
    June 14th, 2014 at 12:12am
  • pbreyoung1996

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    more...please....
    May 17th, 2014 at 03:32am
  • pbreyoung1996

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    more...please....
    May 17th, 2014 at 03:32am
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    more...please....
    May 17th, 2014 at 03:32am
  • ladydee

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    Ohhhh I can't wait update soon
    April 18th, 2014 at 08:33am
  • elisewins

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    woooooooooooooooooooo update! Bye bye Dex.
    April 7th, 2014 at 04:20am
  • katreena

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    i really wish you would update soon :]
    August 19th, 2013 at 06:02am
  • magmababe141

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    Oh man loving this story still and Dex is so out of the picture
    April 25th, 2013 at 02:31pm
  • JustThinking

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    Your descission, if you think it's a story you want to write, then go for it. Hmm.. The boys are going a bit overboard.. But boys will be boys I guess.. Good chapter. Smile
    January 5th, 2013 at 04:59pm
  • D E L E T E D

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    Loved it. The story just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to read more.
    January 5th, 2013 at 10:49am
  • leolion1234

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    Great Chapter! Update soon!!!
    January 5th, 2013 at 06:22am
  • teenagedream91

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    @ smell the sHaRpIeS!!
    Yes i updated and I love the concept of taking this slow. I didn't realize how slow i was going until now.
    I'm team Paul and a little bit of team Dex maybe because he's my OC but whatever. Aren't they? i think it's too adorable when he's around her, he's like a nervous wreck and a worrier.
    i thought so too and it will be darker than this because of Ronnie's state of mind and all, her explanation of Jake came out really natural so i'm excited about it. I'll definitely send you the link once I'm done with the first chapter or so.
    January 5th, 2013 at 05:40am
  • smell the sHaRpIeS!!

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    Yay you updated!! I can't get enough of this story Smile
    Though I'm still team Paul--he's just so freakin adorable around Shiori!- It's kinda cute how Paul and Dex are acting like such kids and I love how completely oblivious Shiori is. And I think a story with Ronnie and Jake is a great idea!
    January 5th, 2013 at 02:39am
  • Natsu

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    Poor Dex, I love that he's protective of Shiori and doesn't want to get hurt, but Paul is definitely stepping up. I am all for team Paul but I'm going feel bad for Dex when he loses.
    December 14th, 2012 at 12:35am
  • magmababe141

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    Finally Paul got some victory on his side of the ring, these are really good.
    December 11th, 2012 at 02:45pm
  • magmababe141

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    Oh you are a sneeky one but this chapter, oh this one was really good. Cool
    December 9th, 2012 at 05:38pm
  • elisewins

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    So true! Good boyfriends don't give ultimatums...well not serious ones anyway lol.
    December 9th, 2012 at 07:55am
  • D E L E T E D

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    Dex just needs to fall back, he is playing a losing game. Hope he's ready for the consequences of his words.
    December 9th, 2012 at 07:48am
  • teenagedream91

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    @ xXLostXSoulXLoverXx
    Thanks :)
    September 21st, 2012 at 07:09am
  • xXLostXSoulXLoverXx

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    Oh!!! I love it!!! :D Can't wait for more :)
    September 21st, 2012 at 05:44am
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