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  • teenagedream91

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    @ saphire-eyes
    I think it's cute too :) Shiori can speak her mind when she wants to and when she has that ounce of courage. She might be more open after a while and let's see how she reacts when she finds out he's a shapeshifter
    September 17th, 2012 at 07:57am
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    aww im happy they are getting closer its cute how they react to each other well at least when shes not being scared of him. Mr. Green
    September 17th, 2012 at 07:52am
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    @ leolion1234
    Thank you! They are getting close ;)
    September 17th, 2012 at 06:17am
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    @ strawberrybubble
    I think Shiori is adorable too. :D Ronnie is just trying to protect her best friend, having Paul, the bully, being around Shiori just makes her uneasy that's all.
    September 17th, 2012 at 06:17am
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    she is so adorable. ronnie is sorta starting to irritate me. update soon =)
    September 17th, 2012 at 04:07am
  • leolion1234

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    This chapter was cute. They are starting to get closer! Update soon!!!!
    September 17th, 2012 at 03:43am
  • D E L E T E D

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    Aw, they're getting closer, I'm so excited. Lol.
    September 16th, 2012 at 08:25pm
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    @ Wolfpack9610
    Thanks. I hope to update soon too
    September 16th, 2012 at 07:30pm
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    @ magmababe141
    It is a shocker, but it has to be done in order for him to be on Shiori's good side and I hope you remember that Shiori is his imprint so he instantly has a soft side when it comes to her. He's now accepting the fact that he needs to win her over so nice Paul might be there to stay
    September 16th, 2012 at 07:30pm
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    @ JustThinking
    Civil Paul never last too long, but he is going to try now that he is on board of getting into Shiori's good graces. It's the bad habits that he really needs to work on aka his temper around her. It's going to be a grueling process. Well Dex is a huge part of the story for now and her not saying it will affect him over time if she doesn't say it back. People can be understanding for so long before they snap.
    September 16th, 2012 at 07:28pm
  • JustThinking

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    I wonder if this civilized Paul will last.. I'm thinking of his anger issues here.. it has already been flaring up a bit of trouble for him.. hmm.. and I wonder how Dex will react to her not saying those three little words and just all of this as it goes along...
    September 16th, 2012 at 06:37pm
  • magmababe141

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    Oh dear Lord Paul is being civilized and not being a damn ass!!! Lol shocker! Mr. Green
    September 16th, 2012 at 04:37pm
  • Jayme112234

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    loved this story and can't wait to read more xx
    September 16th, 2012 at 03:42pm
  • JustThinking

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    So you should know my deal by now xD hehe.. Another good story from you, can't wait to see what will happen. Subscribing! ^.^
    July 31st, 2012 at 07:18pm
  • D E L E T E D

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    Yay! I'm all for plan A, I'm excited to see it play out. Great chapter.
    July 22nd, 2012 at 11:54pm
  • sapphire-eyes

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    haha this is getting even better i cant wait to see what happens next. please update soon.
    Mr. Green
    July 18th, 2012 at 11:37pm
  • PhoebenPaige

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    Such a good story ;) hope to see more updates! Thanks for writing such a good story!!
    July 9th, 2012 at 11:27am
  • xXLostXSoulXLoverXx

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    I just read through all the chapters today :) I love love love it :) and I love magmababe141 comment. I second it lol. :) Can't wait for more :D
    July 8th, 2012 at 06:56am
  • magmababe141

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    If you want something done, you send Jared to do it and set it up, you want something ruined and screwed up, you send Paul lol, love comment and chapter!!
    July 6th, 2012 at 12:44pm
  • notllamadelrey

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    AAAHHHH :DDD
    This is going to be so great.
    July 6th, 2012 at 08:56am