Paul is so rude! She's finally happy and he has to ruin it. I like her and that Dex guy together, even though this is a Paul story lol. I can't wait for the next update!
Eek! Paul is such a jerk! Awww but Dex defended her honor! :) I really hope Dex isn't the way Paul described him! I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Paul is a bitch in this story and for some reason, I like that. I can't wait til he falls for her, then it's pay back mwhahahaha! I also didn't think Dex would go for her but since he did and Paul told her that "Lie" I really want to know if it's true or not. . . . Please can there be a chapter where Shiori put's Paul in his place or someone does, besides Dex or Ronnie???? I would die of happiness. Either way this story is freaky good!
Lol oh my god. When I read it I thought that I missed a chapter but as I read on, I found out it was a dream! And I like Dex, he's cute and I know Paul is going to be jealous. I can't wait until the next chapter.
OMG!!! I read the first part and when I got passed the ring and to the whole boyfriend girlfriend part I stopped and thought,"Hell no, did I miss something? When the hell did this happen?" So I went back to the second to last chapter and was like,"Man the author is screwing with my head now!" Finally I just kept reading and was like, Great success! You really had me thinking I missed a huge part in the story. I liked it, but don't you ever do that again, you nearly gave me a heart attack! I love the story and happy Shiori is getting guy attention, even if it's Paul throwing paper at her . . . I guess lol!
It's cool that you don't have Paul just yet, I like how your developing the character without Paul. Most stories have the love fest going on before anybody can figure out who or how the main character acts without being known as the "vampire's gf" or the "hot wolf guy's gf". This is a refreshing story from the normal ones. I really like it!
I liked the last chapter, I was really hoping Shiori would either snap at the girl or at Paul, but having her walk out during class was pretty awesome too, that's more Shiori's style anyways. Really good story though, keep up the good work.
Please update!!!!1 I wanna see them play a volleyball game and her dominate and people loving her her in school!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Then Paul being jerky and then lovey and just stuff!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!