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  • Clik

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    This was amazing !!!!!

    :)
    August 7th, 2011 at 03:32pm
  • Live In Love

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    This was fucking amazing
    August 1st, 2011 at 04:06am
  • D_rose

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    I loved this story and I loved Gangland as well. I love how unique this was as well, great work!
    July 31st, 2011 at 05:53pm
  • mrgn94cb

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    I am soo happy u didnt kill her! Love how Zacky has a pimp walk. : ) Im really said thought that this story is over, i really loved the whole thing!!!!
    July 30th, 2011 at 03:18pm
  • hachie

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    YAY!!!!!!!! Allie is still alive!
    So Brian went there as fast as possible and saved Allie before that asshole could kill her!
    For a second there I thought Allie was going to die but then Brian came in and saved the day!!!
    I see that they had another kid, and he is more dangerously handsome than his older brother!
    The curse of the Haner! X3
    And Brian doesn't want his daughter to having sex even though she is twenty one, man he is very protective!
    I am happy that Allie and Brian finally got their happy ending and living with their family!
    This story is amazing and I will miss reading it!!!!
    AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    July 30th, 2011 at 03:10pm
  • Synyster Lisa

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    I had to laugh at Zacky's permanent pimp walk thing. XD Great ending though, and I'm glad it was a happy one.
    July 30th, 2011 at 07:06am
  • Jazz1617

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    I'm so glad she didn't die! I absolutely loved this story and loved the ending. I'm glad Brian and Allie were able to raise their kids together and keep them safe. :)
    July 30th, 2011 at 06:50am
  • viciousfeeling

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    please update tonight that would be amazing!!! and please tell me that shot was not at her but that dick i hope he's dead
    July 30th, 2011 at 05:48am
  • powerofkisses

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    UPDATE TONIGHT! TONIGHT! :)) oh I think she's gonna die...
    July 30th, 2011 at 04:49am
  • hachie

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    Wow so they were ambushed?
    So much for that being a success, but I see that Allie went down without a fight!
    I mean even though she got hit by that fat bastard several times, she still fought back and tried to get the gun away from him and end his life.
    I don't believe that Allie is dead because she is one tough mother~bleep~!!!!
    I doubt that if there is a slight chance that asshole killed Allie, he would be able to stand against her children because their father is Synyster fucking Gates!
    And that bastard is going to have face the wrath of Synyster Gates for messing with his wife!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    July 30th, 2011 at 04:12am
  • melodramaticfool-101

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    omg nooooooo dont die
    July 30th, 2011 at 04:07am
  • hachie

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    Awwww Brian and her daughter having a father/daughter moment.
    But him remembering the day she was born, he was given the most precious girl in the world.
    Though he kinda of messed up on his promises, since he became the head honcho in the gang world, his time for his daughter has taken away.
    And he wasn't able to be there to see her grow but she will always love him no matter what.
    LOL I loved how he said he would kill any boys that would try to go near her.
    He is very protective of her and he is going go through hell once she hits her teens.,
    I bet she is going to be like her mother!
    Uh oh I sense that something went wrong with the guys because if it was Allie then Benji would have been more devastated since he grew up with her.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    July 16th, 2011 at 04:51am
  • Synyster Lisa

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    *Keymashes* WHAT'S THAT ENDING ALL ABOUT!?!?!?!?!? Ali better not be dead!!!!!! Nobody good better be dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    July 15th, 2011 at 06:11am
  • hachie

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    YAY Zacky and Arin are still alive! XD
    WHOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I am so happy because they already lost Jimmy and so losing Zacky will make Allie more determine to kill that fat bastard.
    And Charlie reassuring Brian that he has Allie protected since she means a lot to the family.
    LOL now it's Brian's turn to be the one staying at home and worrying about his wife doing something extremely dangerous and possibly get killed.
    But I have no doubt in my mind that Allie will make it back to her family.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    June 29th, 2011 at 06:54pm
  • Jazz1617

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    I'm glad Zacky isn't dead. I would have been so pissed. haha.

    Great update. Can't wait to see what happens next! :)
    June 29th, 2011 at 04:44am
  • PhoebenPaige

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    zomg cliffhanger im so against that lol cant wait for more ;)
    June 5th, 2011 at 05:52am
  • the-quiet-one

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    Whoa, what a suspenseful chapter
    Oh no.....Zacky and Arin need to be okay!!
    I just.....I don't know right now what else to say, kinda floored right now, lol
    But anyway, I really can't wait for more
    Hope you update soon :)
    June 3rd, 2011 at 08:56pm
  • Synyster Lisa

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    This chapppter gave me like 3 heart attacks. Suspenseful and sad with cliffhangers. YOU GOTTA UPDATE SOON CUZ I NEED TO KNOW MATTS REACTION TO THE STORY, IF ZACKY AND ARIN ARE OK, AND WHOSE AT THE DOOR!!!!! *flails*
    June 3rd, 2011 at 03:07am
  • hmc09

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    he best be alive or imma kill you :)
    June 2nd, 2011 at 01:01pm
  • hachie

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    WE CANNOT LOSE ZACKY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I mean like Allie said, he has been there for her and the kids, attending every birthday party and her daughter's dance recital.
    And she barely got to know Arin too, he has to at least form a bond with Allie like the rest of the gang.
    LOL Matt is really observant isn't he, he's notice the change in Allie over the year's.
    She hardly swears at all now since she is taking care of her kids, and that she is always like Matt said "in Momma Hen mode".
    Always worrying about everybody else then herself.
    Maybe that could be her nickname "momma hen" since she is the mother of the group.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 2nd, 2011 at 06:24am