So Far Away - Comments

Loved the update! Sorry to hear about your grandmother. My best wishes go out to her and hope she gets better. Family is all we have that is true <3

I love this, hell, I'm addicted!

At least Brian is really thinking a head, not getting truly intimate until they sort out their problems.
Right now I have some respect for Brian because he told Allie to wait instead of getting very passionate with her like he use to.
But he still has to keep working because problems that he or possible them both have cause doesn't go away that easy and Brian is going to have to earn her trust back.
Because right now she is holding back since she doesn't want get hurt like the times before.
At least they both are slowly getting reconnected again (literally LOL X3).
I can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

Yay u updated so happy!!
Haha brian ans his sticky boxers! will he have to stay in them? Loved the chapter!

Update soon :D Badass chapter(;

O read the chapter again its to funny!! Update again please!!!!!

You must update soon!!!! Im highly addicted! hahaha

Hachie's banner is amazing, and so were the updates. I had to catch up because I have no laptop internet, and when I pulled the story up on my phone, the old layout overlapped. >.<

I also feel like there is gonna be something happening with these "Contacts" that are popping up. Something I think is gonna try and be done to the family, and I hope it's nothing bad. :( I also wonder why Benji is always around. Hmmm Other than being close friends which is understandable, I wouldn't think anything else was going on.

YAY you made my night!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR POSTING ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hmmmm I wonder if this "Alexi" is someone he knows or has a past with.
Since he was obviously pissed that this person is moving into his territory and that is really getting to him.
And I have a feeling that this "Alexi" might target Brian's family so they could get to him.
At least Brian is trying to be in Allie's good side instead of breaking promises like he did before.
It really must get on Brian nerves that Benji is always around Allie and the kids when he is not there.
Someone has to watch for Allie while Brian is doing who knows what and Benji is doing that right now.
Wow Allie is one amazing chick if she is able to make Brian go crazy in three minutes!
I get a feeling that Brian is going to mess up somehow and Allie will definitely be left heartbroken.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

Uh-oh....Brian is jealous. I had to laugh though when the kids knocked on the door. I thought he was gonna get cock blocked like he did in Gangland. haha.
But I'm glad he actually showed up to be with his family.

Great chapter. Please update soon! :)

Hohohohoooo. Brian is jealous, I like that! Maybe he'll understand that he shouldn't take anyhing for granted and that he needs to learn what comes first; family.

Not to be bitchy but this is way easier to read :D I love your story!(:

I love this story its awesome!!!!!!!
I feel bad for Brian, Allie should really give him a chance :p

Man does Brian really think that Allie would believe his stupid lies????!!!!
He has got to remember that Allie has a lot of allies that are still her friends and that is the last straw for her.
I can't believe Brian fucked things up, Allie doesn't trust him anymore and she is REALLY getting ready to send the divorce papers because she is tired of the lies Brian is telling her.
Man I would have sent the papers to him the moment I found he still had some fuck buddies because I wouldn't want him to touch after he has been with another woman or women........gross.
And Brian assumes that she is messing around with Benji when he is the one fucking other whores behind Allie's back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
He needs to understand that Allie and Benji are close because they have been there for each other before Brian came along.
I have a feeling that Benji may harbor some feelings for Allie since they have been there for each other for a long time.
I wouldn't be surprise if Benji would get together with Allie after she boots Brian to the curb for being so stupid.
Benji is right, Allie did nothing wrong, the only person that messed things up was Brian for being so selfish and greedy.
Hey maybe his kids should start to dislike him and begin to get even closer to Benji, that will totally be a slap in the face for Brian!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

i think brian should leave the bussiness to fix things up but other wise loving the story so far :D
update soon please <33

I don't blame Allie for not trusting Brian. I think he would need to leave the business in order to work things out. Update soon please! I'm so addicted to this story. haha

I love this story, please keep up the quick updates, its really nice.

OMG!!!! she needs to give brian a chancee to mend her back toqether!!!

I like this(: But you might want to change the colour of the text, to red for example, because it is hard to read the text as it is very close to the colour of the picture of Syn.

Hmmmm so WTF did Brian do to mess things up? Great start though! And I wonder if the gang thing is still going on...