So Far Away - Comments

Zacky better be alive! haha. Great update. Can't wait for the next one! :)

Thank goodness Benji is still alive!
I mean to be shot four times, he is one tough cookie!
I mean he risked his life to make sure that Allie and Brian's kids are not in harms way.
He really is looking out for her since they have been friends since they were kids.
YAY she is back with the other guys!
LOL Zackys always thinking with his stomach! X3
Aw Arin made his appearance!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Omg I can't believe Benji got shoot!
Anyways love the story... I love how Allie and Brian go from being a badass to a loving parent in a sec. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

So Allie finally got Brian to go to the doctors! LOL
Since he is still hurting after he got blown up.
Uh oh Benji got shot, good thing the kids are some where safe.
And Allie is really determine to end this now before any more people die.
Well at least Matt is going to be there look after her for Brian since she is family.
I really do hope that Allie kills that bastard that is trying to hurt her family!
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loved gangland love this so far awesome!

LOL so they are sparring now, but Brian is always copping a feel!!! X3
I bet if they kept at it, things would get really heated between them since they know how to fight but they love to tease each other.
Wow Kaeden spoke his first words and Brian was there to see it!
I bet he really feels like an ass for missing Cass's first everything but at least now he has his family together.
And Cass does know that he loves her despite his absence, she will always be Daddy's little girl.
LOL I love how he said that he would kill the boy that would break her heart and that she won't date because she will definitely inherit her mother's beauty.
I think Brian needs to forgive himself about accidently killing their first child because now he has a beautiful family to go home too.
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Great update. The first part made me giggle with the whole "Dick in the butt" thing. XD
I like that it's focusing more on their relationship, and I hope they're able to fix things.
I also like the action though too, like in Gangland. Both ways are awesome, and I can't wait for more. ^_^

I like how you're focusing more on their relationship. :)

Great update. Can't wait for the next one! <3

Aww I hope things work out now for Brian and Allie, for the sake of themselves and their kids.

He should know how badass she can be, she did break his arm once! LMAO I think he'll go through with this agreement and let her go. She's a BAMF, and can kick anybody's ass. It might not be easy, but she'll do it.

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Update soon please!

Wow so Allie wants to go in and finish off that fatass that has a huge bounty on her head!
I think it is a great idea but there are very high risks to it.
I mean it is great because Allie was the most skilled fighter still is and with Brian being the well known gang leader and they would never suspect it!
And yay Brian apologize for calling his wife a whore! XD
LOL she really loves to tease him and leaving him there just made her day!
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I just love this story more and more. :)
I wonder if Brian will let her go through with it....
I seriously can't wait to see what happens!

So that fat ass bastard is the one causing all the trouble?
The on that almost killed their little girl and the one that has a hit out on Allie?
I guess he thought that since Allie is out of the game he could take her since she is a full time mother now and that she would be vulnerable.
Man was he mistaken, even if he some how got through the people that are protecting her, she still has a fighting spirit and will not go down so easily.
Yeah they need to work on their communication more since they both though they each didn't want to be there.
At least Brian finally told the truth but he needs to apologize for calling her a whore.
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Awesome update! At least we know what's going on now. And I'm glad those two finally talked. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

this update is amazing!!! i can't wait to see what happens next

Great updates. I had catching up to do.

WTF was with that douche getting Cass caught in the middle of a shootout!? I wonder what's happening. O.O

Ok, that was kinda scary. But at least the kids are okay. And damn, just when Brin thought things were on the way to being good again, he had to open his mouth.

Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one! :)

Awesome chapter!!!!! Ahh fuckn brian needs to think about what he says!!!! Update soon plz!!!!

I literally want to bring bodily harm to Brian for being so ~frustrated scream~ he is one immature asshole!!!!!!!!!!
I understand that he doesn't want to Allie back in the life she let go because she has children but to hide things from her is seriously going to bite him in the ass!
She has the right to know what is going on especially if it involves her daughter who almost got shot!!!
And to openly call her a whore just because Benji is hanging around to keep her company is just completely and immature of him.
It's his fault that he doesn't spend time with his family and Benji is her friend that is trying to feel the hole that Allie feels every time Brian is not there.
He is the one that is whoring around behind his wife's back and she is the one begin faithful!!!!!!
GOD HE IS SO STUPID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The more he does things and thinks that will be better, he is going to lose his entire family!!!!!!!!!
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Hey, sorry to hear about your grandmother. Hope she gets better soon.

Loved the new chapter! Can't wait for the next one! :)