You Had Me At Hello - Comments

more soon please

LOVE THIS STORY! poor maria, i hope they accept her soon. cant wait for next chapter

love this update soon

HOLY BEGINNING COW! Yes I know that right there is funny and makes no sense what so ever. But it's not supposed to so. :) Anyway I love this chapter. Not that she got all made fun of and everything but that it's so true and that things like this happens. But I think that it was awesome. Also The connection I think was a few things. Her anorexia that she had because of her bad ex boyfriend, and her brother's death/ having all her siblings. I kept waiting for her to just come out and say that a lot were adopted but than I was like no they don't deserve to know all that. But this chapter was amazing and Matt was so sweet to her and protecting of her. I really like them together I think they are cute. But I do have to say that this chapter makes me nervous to meet my boyfriends family, friends, and buddies now. I was already scared before but this makes it seem even more possible that they could hate me. Anyway GREAT chapter I loved it and cannot wait for more. :)

I loved this chapter. I think the connection is on the whole anorexia thing right? Anyways. Can't wait for more :D

I really loved this update!
I seriously thought that the rest of the guys were going to welcome her in and be nice to her.
I'm glad that they didn't though, that would have been a bit boring lol
I was really upset that they made her cry though
Really great update and I can't wait for more!!!

I love this story so damm much. I cried so damm much when i found out what happened to her, it was so sad and heartbreaking.

You write so well! I'm really enjoying this story. I like the detail you put into it and the characters are really likeable. I didn't find any grammar or spelling errors so that's good. :) Anyways, amazing job with the story my dear, keep it up! :) Update soon!!!!!!!

Adorable... love this chapter. Please update soon :D

You always write so well. I wish that I could write like you or have the time. So much going on with school almost being done. But anyway. Great chapter. It might have been short and simple but it was so nice because your able to look into their life and see them just have a casual day and how they are just like normal people. Plus you got to see how she was with her friends. And how she is when some strange person comes to the door that she could have gotten jealous of or something. Anyway. Great job. really good chapter. Sometimes to me one's like these can make or break a story. This help make it. :)

This chapter is so honest. She came out and told him everything. How things happened and why and to tell him everything makes her such a strong person. It was a powerful chapter and I am really glad to hear her story. And to see everything that happened to her and she still be the person she is, is amazing. She is so strong and brave and wonderful and I want to be her best friend (though she doesn't exists, but if she did we would be best friends). Thank you for such an amazing powerful chapter. Keep up the good work.

This chapter is so honest. She came out and told him everything. How things happened and why and to tell him everything makes her such a strong person. It was a powerful chapter and I am really glad to hear her story. And to see everything that happened to her and she still be the person she is, is amazing. She is so strong and brave and wonderful and I want to be her best friend (though she doesn't exists, but if she did we would be best friends). Thank you for such an amazing powerful chapter. Keep up the good work.

Hi there! Comment Swap sent me here and honestly, the story isn't really my thing.
It's really difficult to read because of the colors, so I didn't read the whole thing. You might want to change that because it does drive away potential readers. I know i didn't want to read the whole thing because of that.
I only saw a few minor spelling and grammar errors, other than that and maybe spacing, i say keep up the good work!

I suck! I am so sorry for not commenting until this new chapter. College has me going a million miles a minute and when I finally stop its time for bed or I just think about going home. But these last two chapters are really good. I like them a lot and I am so excited to see where their relationship goes. I also really like that Maria was so open about her scares and everything. And YES I would love a prequel. You do an amazing job and I really like it. Please keep it up.

I 'm deff gonna check you new stories out and also, nice chapter... I love Matt as well :D Please update soon :D

Okay, so first off, it's difficult to read because of the colors. I don't have the greatest vision to begin with so that was a bit of an annoyance but it's all good. :) Second, the story is cliche, but good. I like it. I've done this sort of story myself, haha. It's always fun to write this type of story. All in all, I enjoyed it. Keep it up. :)

Hello, hello, hello. I was sent here by comment swap. Uhm it was a bit hard to read because of the colors clashing, so I only got to read the first two chapters. Sorry about that. Just a wuick note, aside from the very few spelling and grammar mistakes, try starting to double space between paragraphs, especially between dialouge. I, personally, think it could use more detail. But other thsn that it was a good story, albeit cliche, but good job doll :)

I absolutely love this! I can't wait until you update! This is soooooo good.

not a matt sandares fan but im really glad comment swap brought me here! its really good and i love the way you have characters interact with each other. but there are a fefw faults that i cant seem to ralate to any of your original character but that okay cuz you have a great plot going! keep it up!! :)

not a matt sandares fan but im really glad comment swap brought me here! its really good and i love the way you have characters interact with each other. but there are a fefw faults that i cant seem to ralate to any of your original character but that okay cuz you have a great plot going! keep it up!! :)