June 18th, 2012 at 03:24am
You Had Me At Hello - Comments
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I'm not that much into A7X fics but I thought I'd give this a go and see what happens. I quite like your style, but I think that you need to make your stories less dialogue driven and add in more detail. I'm also not fond of your use of tense but that's my problem, not yours. Over all, I think this is good, the characters seem very real and your use of grammar and spelling are to a very high standard. Keep writing. :3June 18th, 2012 at 02:57am
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Well say hello to a new subscription from me! :D Avenged Sevenfold is my absolute favorite band and to be handed an A7X story to leave a comment on makes me a happy person.First of all, I love your character, she seems like a fucking awesome person to meet if she was a real life person.Your chapters are very well written an thought out, I have absolutely nothing wrong to say about this story.You are a BRILLIANT writer, good job to you! PLEASE update soon, I have to read more! :)June 16th, 2012 at 08:02am
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Matt is so adorable... Love this chapter. Please update soonJune 16th, 2012 at 03:43am
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Matt is so adorable... Love this chapter. Please update soonJune 16th, 2012 at 03:43am
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This is a really good story. I'm really impressed!!! You've created the characters so well that they seem like completely real people and you've recorded their conversations. Your chapters are the perfect length and it's really easy to read. I had to read it all in one night. So impressed. Keep up the good work!!!June 16th, 2012 at 01:18am
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This is such a wonderful, amazing, interesting, captivating, and flat out fantastic story!!! Its funny, the characters don't seem fake and forced, and Maria is fantastic :) lol i'm subscribing! Keep up your writing, cause your bloody brilliant at it! much love! <3June 16th, 2012 at 12:50am
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This is a really good story, keep up the work! :3
Your chapters also aren't too short or too long and you write really detailed, which is a great thing as well! Additionally, I wanted to let you know that I think your layout is really great, I love it!June 15th, 2012 at 07:25pm -
This is a really good story, keep up the work! :3
Your chapters also aren't too short or too long and you write really detailed, which is a great thing as well!June 15th, 2012 at 07:22pm -
I've actually fallen in-love with this story. It's absolutely great. I read through the character descriptions and I saw she was from Kent, I restrained myself from shouting me too, to wake my mum up, ehe. But yeah, this story is really captivating and descriptive and it's just brilliant. I've subscribed and recommended this. I can't wait for the next update! Good luck with your brilliant writing! xoxo.June 15th, 2012 at 01:35am
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Maria is awesome... can't wait for more. Great chapterJune 4th, 2012 at 07:15am
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So good. I am still sorry to hear that you are going in and out of the hospital I really do hope that you are getting better. I really liked this. Chapter cuz Maria is all BA on the guys telling them to stop fighting and especially over dumb things. I am glad that she is the way she is. She is all go for it and be adventures but then she also is so quite and soft. Hearing all the piercings she has makes me think she is even more BA. I am so excited for her to be with Matt. Thy are going to have so much fun and I can already tell. Like I said I LOVE this story. I hope you update as soon as possible and get better even faster. Your pretty awesome!!!!!!June 3rd, 2012 at 12:52am
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please update soonJune 2nd, 2012 at 10:04am
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So Sorry that I haven't commented on anything really. It seems that mibba just about disliked everyone for awhile. What happened for me is if you left a comment on my page and then i couldnt read the comment or see it anywhere. finally today it decided to be nice and let me do that. Thanks so much for the udate even though it was a month ago. I hope you are feeling better and doing much better. you really do write amazingly. I love this chapter and well this story in general. it is so good. and thanks for mentioning me. that makes me feel special, but also bad because it took me so long to finally get to read this chapter and everything. you have a major talent and i hope one day you can get a book published. when you do shot me an e-mail so i know which book to go out and buy. and also so i can go out and tell everyone that i knew her before she became famous. i am excited to see what happens next. cannot wait!! :) feel betterJune 1st, 2012 at 07:55am
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Love this story..I need more...congratz on your excelent job :DApril 29th, 2012 at 07:15am
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i am so sorry to hear you are in the hospital. thank you for taking the time to post this. i hope that you get better soon. i really enjoyed the story. it hits home for me. my sister was abused by her ex-husband and i am glad that there are people out there to get the message out that people need help. i really do hope that you get better soon. cant wait for the next update! getting better soon :)April 1st, 2012 at 06:45am
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So sorry to hear that you were in the hospital. I hope that everything is okay. If not get better soon. I actually loved this chapter because you got to see parts of Maria that you haven't and you get to see the way she is with everyone some more. Including Matt and Jim. And you get to see how Matt is with her and how much he likes he and wants to spend all his time with her. It's cute and I like it a lot. Thanks for the update!!March 8th, 2012 at 10:50pm
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AH!!! So made my Valentines Day. I love that they are like together but not. I wish more people would do this. Get to really know each other before they go and date. I am so excited that everything is going so well. I can't wait for the guys to meet him and see what they say. I think it also is so cute that he brought her flowers and that they held hands right away. They seem so cute together and I am so excited for the next chapter. Please update soon. I have a feeling this might become my number one favorite story. It's in the top five right now. :)February 15th, 2012 at 06:26am
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I love this story. I was so shocked to see both graves. And then she was really nice to the guy she buys flowers from. I really LOVE this story. Please update soon. I am in college with no tv so your stories are all I have cuz none of my others are updating. THANKS!January 25th, 2012 at 05:49am
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love it! :)January 10th, 2012 at 12:58am
Also, there are numerous grammatical errors in this chapter, and you haven’t properly formatted this story. It’s against the rules to not put breaks between your paragraphs because it makes it very difficult to read.