The Devil's Deal - Comments

I freaking love this story!!!!! Update soon :)

Is it weird that I'm reading this in the back of my chruch because I'm sacristining? Haha slightly ironic......

I love this story I can't wait to see what happnes between them and what else he needs her to do for him. I want to know what his friends think of her too,
Great update :)

I loved this update
With the last chapter I was wondering if this story was going to turn into a romanctic story or not. Either way I would have enjoyed the story. But it's getting me curious as to how they will develop into a relationship. I really tried not to laugh or smile when he thought she was trying to kill herself . . . It probably wasn't meant to be funny but I thought it was. I really wanna know what his friends will think of her and how this seduction plan will play out.
<3 Michele

Ohmygod. This is so amazing.
This chapter had me laughing so much.
Zack doesn't know what a shower is, of course he's gonna go look.
Question though (and I'm not sure if it was asked already), but it Zack like a vampire or something?
I only ask because I don't know many other creatures that extract fangs.
(Sorry if it was asked already.)

A-fucking-mazing! I loved the whole shower scene, it amused me to no end!
Can't wait for more!
xXx

This is amazing.
I love it. <3!
you need to updaaate me! :3

Great update :D

this is such an interesting story, completely different to a lot of the other stories that i've read.
:)

ohh im soo excited! it was beautiful lady!!
:] I loved the part about how death is beautiful; and what not.
and im curious about the necklace;
why would he want it?
and that poor girl; I really hope she doesnt go insane. I'd do the same thing for my little brother. :(

and im really excited for this story since you said it would be romantic; I wannt know how that plays out really badly.

you need to update ASAP.

I am a super FANatic of yours bwhahahaah

Ashleigh, this chapter was just as fantastic as the last chapters were! I was curious at first as to why he wanted her to go gravedigging, and I was especially curious because I figured he could just do it himself. But now, I'm excited because this opens a whole new set of doors for this chapter. I have a feeling that that necklace is going to be particularly important in the plot development of this story, and I can't wait to see what happens with it. And, once again, I found the whole chapter almost....sexy, in a way. The way you described the night atmosphere is my idea of romantic (sick, I know...) and I think that his chuckle added in with the crows' caws would be absolutely hot. I'll stop droning on about that now, and end this rather long comment by saying how much I love you for writing this--again--and how much I can't wait to see the next chapter.

Great!! It was amazing!

This is truly amazing! Everything else has been said by the other commenters, I agree with them all.

Oh my god!!! This was an amazing update!!!!
Everything was really well written in this chapter. You had great descriptions of the scenes before her and it almost felt like i was there instead of her.
I wonder what he is gonna make her do now
<3 Michele

Great update

Woah! This is amazing!

Wow, this is amazing.
Please please keep me updated! <33

I think this deserves a huge round of applause. It's so dark and ugh... Amazing. Now I wonder who's grave will it be. Update soon.

Oh. my. gosh.
I LOVE this story so far!
I just can't believe it! The plot line, Zack's character, everything.
Wow, words just can't describe it, lol.
Update soon! <3

When Zacky appeared in the bathroom the first thing that came to mind was O_o Zacky: The Perverted Devil. I'm pretty sure I wasn't the only one thinking that. Zacky was a bit of jackas$ in this chapter, I felt like hitting him with a baseball bat. I don't have much about this chapter, sorry for saying this again, it was short.
Forgive me for making this comment extremely rude, but I can't help myself. -.-'