The originality of this story, especially Zacky's character amaze me. I'm honestly at a loss for words at what to say XD I can't wait to see how the others are portrayed. Is Kayla going down with Zacky to hell? Cause I mean, I doubt he'd have her digging graves on earth.... And how else is she gonna meet the others? Uhg, I can't wait!
This is seriously my second favorite story on here, only to When I Love You Means Don't Hurt Me :D
Ashleigh, I can't say how amazing this chapter was. Zee...in a toilet stall....that's an awfully cozy space. I have no idea how I find the bad ass, mean, degrading-ish Zacky sexy...I'm loving it. I love it so much that you can present such a different version of Zacky; such an original version of Zacky, and make me just...kind of melt, actually. He's so sexy, and I love it so much. I can't wait until next time you update. :D
I love it, the way you right m'dear; its beautiful, and it flows soo well, and all the detail you put into it; it really draws an image in my mind for me.
but I do gotta ask, is this a love story eventually? or just a normal one? update soon m'dear I loved it.
Four words, I. F*cking. Love. You. This chapter is the word epic. If I googled the word epic I bet this chapter would pop up. It is so damn discriptive, I can see Zacky with a devilish smile, I can hear Noah's screams, I can feel Kayla's fear, and for some reason, I picture Zacky with red eyes. The only problem I have with chapter is, it was too short. PS: I've been reading Kayla's The Inbetween and it is amazing, I made a banner for it a couple days a go!
Ashleigh, this chapter was just as amazing as the first chapter was. I love how descriptive you were. And talk about a devil on your back. Is it weird that I thought it was just a little hot when his breath was on her neck? That was just sexy. I loved the fact that it was so beautiful in such a different way. I can't wait to see what the next chapter looks like. All of your stories are just amazing, and I can't wait. Thank you again so much for being such an amazing writer and friend!
Oh, my god... Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god, oh my god, oh my, freakin' god, oh my GOD! Its perfect. Every word its just, perfect. I've never been so happy. Ever. I' might make a banner for this story. Tell Kayla Happy Birthday for me!
Ah yes! :D I have to say, I was going to comment on this before even the first chapter was out, but I kept putting it off, and now it's out! Well, I was gonna say how excited I was to read this, but now I'll just say holy shit! I love the idea, it's so original, and I love your writing style and how you started off the first chapter. Amazing job, again!
Ashleigh! I can't wait to see the next chapter. I'm already in love with it. I love how emotional it already is; how much emotion there is and how much thought you've put into it. I love how you've portrayed the characters, and Zacky. This is just so fucking phenomenal so far. And it's only the first chapter! You've got me on the edge of my seat and I truly can't wait to see more from you. I have a feeling this is going to be an absolutely amazingly huge story.