Twisted and Broken Things - Comments

This is AMAZING!!!!! please write more. I'm loving it!!!! <3

I love this. It is absolutely amazing. I hope you update it soon!!!!!!!!!

How have I not found this sooner? I love it! Great job!

I love this fic hope you update soon!!

I cried when Hayden said goodbye to Basil... I still have tears in my eyes.
I was like 'Awww', when they kissed because you described how Brendon felt when, Hayden was talking about the Eiffel Tower and how Hayden felt to him when they were kissing, so detailed!
It would be different and unecxiting if it would have gone like this:
'Brendon looked into Haydens eyes, and he inched towards her face and suddenly their lips met'...
Boooooooooring! And i like how you write! THUMBS UP!

I love this so much! It's just short of perfect, it reminds me of beauty and the beast in some areas, which is just *sigh* amazing xD

Please update soon!

love the update :D

I enjoy this so much.

I love this :)))))

B-e-a-utiful!!! Love how she cares so much for the fox, that she takes it home.. I was like Awww!
I also love how the fact that it snowed, can make her so hyper!
Keep on going, and Update!

The summary was okay, but it didn't really grab my interest. I loved the layout, it was simple and it fit the tone of the story =D. From reading the first chapter, it left me a bit confused. I wasn't quite sure what you were talking about until I read the first chapter and got the gist of what the story was about. Your grammar was absolutely perfect =], are you an editor? Last thing, this story is really interesting, I'm subbing. Even though I kinda know where this is going, he's going fall in love with the human that he finds, but I would love to see what happens leading up to that point. Keep writing!!! =D

I haven't looked at this story in a while - not since I completely cleared my subscription list - but it all just came rushing back as soon as I clicked on it. It still has that same pretty layout and stunning writing style that is all you and that makes me very, very happy, not even going to lie. c: <3 I'm sincrerely glad you recommened this for cooning because now I get to catch up from where I left off and re-subscribeeee. c:

Ooh, the plot is thickening immensley. It's definitely getting deep and nice and comfy cozy. All the lines are being cast and they're all reeling me in, one by one. I like the characters and as always, I like your detail. I also like how the big gahunna kind of guy - the obvious vampire boss - was all, "Who knows me better than my friends?"That's a really, really nice line, because it's true, in a way. And, not to mention the fact that he's lucky to have friends who know him so well - or as he thinks they do - for so long - cause vamps live foreverrrrr and forever would be a long time to be without a good friend or a spouse. :)

I can't wait to see how this all plays out, you know?c: I'm eager as a beaverrrr. <3 This is a wonderous story and you've done an amazing job so far. c: <3

Aaaahhhhh thank you thank you thank you for updating!!! You have made my life! :) great chapter I like this nicer but trying to be mean brendon. And Ryan is soo adorable!

love the update :D

I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!! haha Brendon's character is insanely hot yet frustrating! hope you post soon!

The Dandies, to me, didn’t really seem like the vampires that are written into stories nowadays. They seem so sophisticated and just… better than any other vampires that I read about. But I like how the four of them that were mentioned in the first chapter have a close relationship with each other. It seems nice.

What I like about the first chapter was William’s speech about finding a girl to love forever. I found it funny because he wasn’t going to go search for a girl himself but make his friends and the other vampires find a girl for him. To me, it seems kind of lazy but it also made me think that he is too busy to go out and find that perfect girl for him.

Poor Hayden. After meeting the amazingly handsome guy Brendon, he almost killed her by the end of the night. But I’m glad that he didn’t kill her because that would really suck, and she is, I’m guessing, a very important character. So if she died, who knows what would happen.

Anyway, after reading three chapters of this story, I found this is be a really well written and interesting vampire story. I can assure you that it is different from the other vampires stories that I have come across. Great job!

gahh, I just love this story !!!!!!!!
one of my favorite brendon urie fics out there, I'm serious .
update more often please because this story is so fcking good

love the update :D

I loved it, I have nothing more to say :)
this is simply ... perfect

love the update :D