His Favorite Wife - Comments

very good.

I feel as if this just became even more un realistic. Slave? Tests? This doesn't make sense and i feel as if it's unnecessary. The plot and writing of this story is mostly good. But i think its one of the writers that throws off the story at times,idk which one though. Anytime the plot/ story goes off, it's probably the work of that writer. I like how the story goes for a while, and then bam! Phoebe is once again forced to do something sexual or she's killed. Its silly and it's always the same reason behind it. Like change it up, but stop making it silly and repetitive... with the same person!

Sebbie confuses me one minute I love him for her the next I hate him! Dinah needs to die or leave, idk but she is evil!!!

Love it... Sebbie still pisses me off though...

Sebastian has been forgiven way too many times for my liking. So as of now I really don't know what to call him. But hey, keep going.

ehhh, I've been losing interest in this story from the past couple of chapters...

I don't like Phoebe too much as of late... but keep updating :)

awwwww :)

AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ugh its so FRUSTRATING!

As much as I hate to say it, I wish she would go back with Matt! Well, if he was nicer. But maybe he'll change! Keep updating!

ugh. no! Please update again!

Please, don't let the baby die. I have a strong feeling, the baby is the only one who could bring Phoebe out of the trouble

Please keep updating! :)

She must live!!!!
the baby! SAVE THE BABY!!!!!!!

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE ANOTHER UPDATE!!!!

AHHHHHHH SHE IS PREGOOO!!!!!!
I am so happy
and well of course she has to keep te baby(i am against abortion so thats a little biased but whateva)

My dark side, said : Do not come back to him. Afraid with the feeling that he felt when he was around her is just an excuse to be immature. But my bright side, said: Just forgive him. but don't make it easy. He need to try hard, to get Phoebe's heart back. So till, then use Alize as an excuse, She's staying with him.

THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES EVER

OK, so here's the deal, I spent TWO days reading this story and you left me at a chapter like that?? NO! I am like dying!!!!!! I have to have more!!!!! please please please!!!! I am subscribed and WAITING!!!

First of all, I don't like how all the characters act like the robots. I can't feel any emotion from any of them. It also seems like you're rushing things too much. There's very little to no description in the story. I only read about three chapters and correct me if I'm wrong, but did Pheobe skip two grades or something? She can't be 16 and nearly graduating senior year unless has skipped a few grades. I also just don't like how all three of his wives get along so well. And the fact that her parents were so quick to give her away.

I would also like to say that I love how the storyline is very original.