His Favorite Wife - Comments

Holy cow Alize is REALLY smart!!!
And Sebastian what an arse

chapter 62 = ridiculous

Sebastian needs to pull his head out of his butt :\

Woohooo an update! I honestly think she should get a divorce so that Sebastian can stop being such a cocky douche... lol please keep updating! (:

I'd dump his sorry a$$ if a guy ever said/did that to me! I don't give a crackers who he is ....

Ugh I felt SO bad fr phoebe. He's being so mean to her and he doesn't even feel bad about it. Phoebe deserves better. She should just leave and let Sebastian felt bad for losing someone that amazing.

I'm starting to HATE Sebastian again, he think that all women should obey their husbands or boyfriends

I think Phoebe and Luia will both get pregnant

grr i hate dinah i hope she like gets run over and dies or gets amnesia!!!
update like immediately please and thank
you

This story is amazing! I started today and read everything
.. haha. I know its pretty crazy of me and messed up but I'm kind of hoping that phoebe tries to suicide just so that sebastian can love her again... or at least run away she doesn't deserve to be a slave! Update soon <3

she should take alize and run!

sabastian is a dick. he needs to learn respect for woman. they aren't ment to be stepped on but held up so they can stand beside there man not bow at there feet. ugh sabastian makes me hate him in these last 2 chapters you guys have posted. hopefully as this story progresses i will like him again and he will b nice to phobe. anyways great update guys hope ull update soon =)

I hope Sebastian realizes what an arse hes been or Pheobe leaves him and later finds out she is with child.

sebastian is am asshole in this chapter and i HATE derianah. she needs to b killed. not phobe. and no i do not think phobe is lying about everything. hope ull update soon!!!

Wow I would never thought that sebastion would be that mean to phoebe

You better update asap this story is a-mayzing!

WOW that chick above me is bashing ull bad. dont let her make ull stop reading. she is probably jealous. u dont get 1000 readers for nothing. dont stop just cuz one person makes a bad comment. oh yeah and u suck chickadee

if Sebastian doesnt kill matt now he really has control of his emotions. but matt does deserve it. update soon plz =)

You guys need to actually re-read your chapters before you post them. The grammar and spelling is appalling. Also, you need to make your point of views match up. When one thing is said in one POV, and then something completely different happens (in the same scene!) in another POV, it makes the entire story just painful to read.

Finally, your characters don't ever match up. One moment this girl is a very strong female lead, and then she goes off and fcks this man, and I lose all respect for her. Her characterizion is haywire and makes little to no sense. Characterization is the backbone to most stories, and so far you've just about destroyed hers. At chapter seven I can't really see any point in finishing the story because so far this story has been ridiculously predictable. I would suggest working out the kinks in your plot early on.

EwI hate Sebastian you should give him erectile dysfunction!!