I don't kno why but I laughed when she threw up on him haha! That must suck! But great chapter! I think she should leave Sebastian. Hope you update soon!
i can't believe that Matt kidnapped Alize and make Phoebe do sexual favors in order to save her daughter D< I bet that Sebastian is going to kick matt's ass for hurting his sister and Phoebe. He's not going to let him get away with what he did to his family. Great updates :D
I can't believe that matt was going to rape her D< She needs to tell Sebastian what's happening..tho he not going to be happy that matt tried this, but Sebastian can protect her. hopefully he doesn't blow up on her. Great update
Okay. So I'm only on chapter 4 and i will keep reading. But do ya'll read each others chapters? Because ya'll are writing two completely different things. Please comment on my profile and tell me whats up because its good but very confusing. If ya'll don't read each others chapter before you post them then i think that needs to be fixed. Please don't get me wrong I've only read the first four chapters and they are good. I'm just confused is all. Thank you for listening or well reading. --Darkness-Surrounding.
Aww I saw that sebastian totally redeemed himself this time :) Tho that was a bomb that sebastian threw at Phoebe..now she's going to be starting school. i wonder how that's going to work out for her. great update
... i'm so confused. The story is great but then the chapters don't match up! like ex, in chapter two it says she's going somewhere after he dad slaps her. in chapter three! it says that her parents left so sebastian and Phoebe can 'bond'. then in chapter three it goes back to her running away from her house....
but great plot :) Just try to match up the chapters so they make sense.
If Dinah and Phoebe got along sometime in the story, I might kill someone! And Sebastian is a jerk! I love his name, but his a mayor jerk! Blaming Phoebe when Dinah is the one at fault and then he leaves to run away from his problems. Coward he is. xD