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  • santababy102

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    update please
    August 15th, 2011 at 12:12am
  • laughingkid

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    Lets just hope that Phoebe listens to Dinah and Martha.
    August 5th, 2011 at 03:43pm
  • Kibagal

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    You need to fix your spelling and grammar majorly, it detracts from the story. It won't be that hard to fix it, sorry to sound bitchy but I've commented on this matter multiple times.
    August 5th, 2011 at 09:37am
  • Tofindme

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    okay. Of course they have to do something perverted. I am wondering about the tampon though.
    August 1st, 2011 at 06:07pm
  • santababy102

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    update please
    July 29th, 2011 at 06:11am
  • akanevampire19

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    Phoebe's life is going to be really bad when Sebastian leaves..... I really, REALLY hope Chloe can help her! Phoebe don't deserve anything of that..... I'm glad she didn't have to to anything to Martha! =D
    July 23rd, 2011 at 05:44am
  • laughingkid

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    Dinah and Martha still couldn't punish Phoebe cause of Alize if they leave marks on Phoebe and Alize notices she will tell Sebastion
    July 23rd, 2011 at 04:04am
  • brbcharmed

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    Love this story!! I cnat wait for the next update! Keep up the great work :)
    July 19th, 2011 at 09:45pm
  • Tofindme

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    a chapter from Dianah Pov hmm interesting.
    Sebbie is definitely gunna freak if he evr finds out.
    July 15th, 2011 at 04:23am
  • akanevampire19

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    I haven't received any updates from the story!!!!! =O I read like 9 chapter? And that was too much information for 1 day!!!! Ugh!!!! I hope Dinah and Martha get trough hell when Sebastian know everything they have done to Phoebe! And Phoebe is insane for accepting being their slave!!!! I'm so mad at that!!!! I can't believe she lost the baby... The positive thing I found is Phoebe taking care of Alize as a mother, I really like that =)
    July 15th, 2011 at 04:12am
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    pretty short chapter but i liked it:)
    espicially in a different perspective
    update:)
    July 15th, 2011 at 03:05am
  • laughingkid

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    Wow Dinah POV wwsn't has bitchy as I would have thought. I think Sebastion is gonna freak if he finds out.
    July 15th, 2011 at 02:59am
  • Kibagal

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    Hey y'all seriously need to check and improve spelling and grammar. Nice plot though.
    July 15th, 2011 at 02:47am
  • Tofindme

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    Holy chiz 97 subscribers.
    The first chapter has been read like almost 600 times.
    This story is effing amazing.
    July 14th, 2011 at 03:27pm
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    this story is absolutely amazing!
    i cant wait fer you to update so please do it soon
    July 14th, 2011 at 11:13am
  • Sleepy-San

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    Okay, you said they always close down the sex shop for the two girls but Lily & Matt came in. I'm confused.
    July 14th, 2011 at 09:28am
  • laughingkid

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    You posted chapter 37 twice. Matt should've ran away and married her but he didn't so she ended up marring Sebastion
    July 14th, 2011 at 05:53am
  • dakunaito

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    Well... Matt is a jerk just saying... but he could be doing it just to get Pheobe back... hmmm so many things... Very good though :)
    July 14th, 2011 at 05:16am
  • laughingkid

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    She's gonna do what Martha asks tho she's not gonna like it
    July 13th, 2011 at 06:39pm
  • Tofindme

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    oh boy Pheobe is screwed.
    Im thinking she is going to do what Martha asks but then Dinah walks in and gets mad.
    July 13th, 2011 at 03:16pm
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