His Favorite Wife - Comments

Hmm I definitely agree with laughingkid

Shaking my head Dinah should be shamed for that act she put on before the sex it was so wrong and now it seems like her and Martha are going to gang up on Phoebe on their little outting

update soon?

This update made me rather sad. I feel so bad for Phoebe.

AH I love this story. update soon?

Phoebe is goin to freak when Sebastion is going to explain why Alize called her mommy

more updates, soon? please? =)

I just spent the last FOUR FREAKING HOURS reding the thirty two chapters.
Its amazing. Please update soon

O.O I want to know what happens when he sees Phoebe. I hope for a update soon.

I wonder who pushed Phoebe...it was most likely Dinah
P.S. I can't wait til Phoebe kicks Dinah's ass.!

I can tell u now ot either Martha or Dinah maybe both

I love the story I wish that it would be updated soon

:o

I am excited to see what happens. I can't wait for the next update.

there are two ways to put picures of the characters on here, you can get the codes of the pictures and use that Ex: [url=www.blahblah]Pheobe[/url] and that give you a link. or you can scroll all the way to the bottom of your mibba and do to the section that says characters and get the pictures from your database and put them there (:
Ohh and your story is such a rollorcoaster ride, like how can Phoebe just forgive him for ALL the SHIT he did to her?!?! its insane!! whatever, it is definitally an interesting story.

This last chapter was easier to read! Hurray for better grammar and spelling! Do post more soon!

omg i so hope sebastian kicks who ever pushed her out the windows a**. that was uncalled for, and i probably already know who did it =). oh well update soon as this story keeps me intreaged

I'll be suprised if that baby comes to a full term and be healthy. I bet it was Martha or Dinah that pushed her out cause Chloe wouldn't do that

Kinda makes me mad how Sebastian likes Phoebe so much when his first wife was Chloe.. Obviously he didn't marry Chloe just for kids, because she was his first wife and blah

Anyways, I'm not a fan of how Phoebe is acting right now. Kinda being a stuck up bitch, and I don't see how she could just lose all the feelings for her previous boyfriend that she said she was like in love with so quickly.
It's like overnight she changed, and doesn't give a shit about him. xD that doesn't make sense.

i like it but sometimes the grammar and spelling errors detract from the story which really makes it hard to follow. just as well with what goes on between the two authors not coinciding exactly. it somewhat does but not completely. over all i like the concept.