The Ultimate Bet - Comments

I'm completely serious. I LOATHE THIS FIC! This story SUCKS [I really want to delete it, tbh] IN FACT, I THINK I STILL MIGHT!

I wrote this chapter and kept doing this the entire time: Flicking off my own story, thank you very much! Why? Because you may steal my words, but you'll never be able to plagiarize my ability to flick off my own story.

SO HAHAHA! THE JOKE IS ON YOU, SUCKA!

:cheese:

omfg.

THANK YOU!! ♥ :arms:

I started writing on the next chapter this evening, still brainstorming ideas with my muse. So hopefully the next update won't take another month like the last.
:shifty

i just found this...

holy turkey stuffing this is amazing! i love it, i don't even know what words to use to describe how i feel after reading it all so far...i don't...i got to the end of the last chapter and i was like, wtf, there's no more....

wow, i have a feeling that gerard was the person who was keeping bob occupied when no one was looking and that mikey will win the bet between ray and gerard....or who knows, maybe ray will get further than gerard....but seriously, after that last chapter, poor frankie!

more soon please?!

^.^

time to updateeee
: D

I really really like this story. I feel bad for Frank.

Update soon?

I hope you know I am fucking addicted to this epic tale. You know you're going to have to update soon, right? Because I freaking worship this story.
"You hate Beetlejuice and I'm telling Mom"
Telling Mom what?"
Think back the last 5 years"

eeeeep! amazing x283823727362736266326367 !!
I'm seriously in love with this story. :D

eeeheeeee!!
*cries*

goddamnmotherfuckinpeiceofshit gerard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*stabs multiple times*

^___^

*waves the Bob flag*

you know where my vote is cast, my dear!

and you are utterly amazing.
<3

I LOVE THIS. Words cannot describe how much in love I've fallen for this story. Naive little Frank, manipulative Gerard, obnoxious Mikey, and all the other characters - pure brilliance. I would so write a longer comment, but I'm afraid I have to get to bed and plus words just aren't enough to convey how amazing I found this story.

Wahhhhhh, you're just a genius aren't you now? :arms:

You know how much I fucking love this story, it actually really depressed me that I lost it too, I mean, I wanted to know what Ray's try would be like (I like that they were so good together there were explosions, lol) but I like this whole new take on like Gerard actually going into being boyfriend's with Frank before even falling for him, and now he's really damn stuck.

I know this comment isn't as good as my old ones, you need to send me those and I'll post them all up on here for you to share with all your readers, because they were so cool and random, lol.

Another thing, I just love the Way brother's relationship, I don't have any siblings so I miss out on all that fun, lol. This can only be the most amazing story I've read all year, dude, I love you, honestly, and not even in the kind you get up and run away after saying it, lol.

Hahaha how funny it is that he tries to piss of Linda and does the opposite!
Also, that picture is the exact Frank I imagined! Yeah, go me! Awh, he's such a nerd in that picture.
:]
I think Gerard really does love him.
More when you can
xo

xkidswithgunsx:

WOW. i cant wait for more...
this is the best story line i've ever seen .haha.

its kindof sad that teenage boys are like that, but you captured the teenager boy charicter 100% perfect!
hahahaah

WOW. i cant wait for more...
this is the best story line i've ever seen .haha.

MISFITmalice___x:

New reader ;] Awesome awesome story. Last chapter was kind of confusing, but maybe that's just me.

Being theevil kind and caring person that i am, i shallmurder you if you don't update give you cookies to persuade you to update soon!
-hands you a plate of cookies- ;D

Thank you :)

Oh, well, it was kinda *meant* to be confusing. Gerard wasn't in the right state of mind. The next part will be a bit more of Frank's pov... so stay tuned. :)

Stepha righ?:

Wow. I really love this. I keep imagining Frank in those cute thick black frammed glasses he wears sometimes and it makes me smile.

xoxo
s.

Thanks so much for commenting :)
Oh, I know. I base Frank off this picture myself; Frankie

mmm

Alexithymia.:

Holy Shit.

Every time I expects it goes one way, it goes in the complete opposite direction.

I love your writing with this, the way you crave around Gerard's personality making you want hate him, but really deep down... you just can't.

And Frank, he is so freaking innocent. I adore him and how you've portrayed him in this. Making a character that is indeed so inexperienced at things that Gerard obviously is well acquainted with, is one hell of a tricky thing.

I can't wait to see what you do with the next chapter.

Thank you Your reaction is exactly what I was hoping for. I kinda knew what people thought would happen, but thought, 'Mmm, I'm gonna change this up a litte.' Glad it didn't disappoint :) Thanks for saying about Gerard. A lot of people hate him, but I personally love him because he's the epitome of the horny teenage boy who only cares for himself. He's a guy, people. Guys aren't as sensitive as we like to think. :/

Yes, it is very hard. Partially why they didn't exactly have sex because it would've been even harder with Frank's inexperience. But I'm still glad it didn't disappoint. Loved your review, in case you couldn't tell.

The Boy - 00.05.:

:tehe: I like how you made Gerard's personality, too. He's far too cynical and mean, so ... Teenage like. :shifty Yet you cannot, simply cannot hate him.
Then there's Frank who's far too innocent for his own good. And the Way brothers? Yeah, exactly how I imagine them to be, actually. :tehe:
Bob has to be one of my favorites, though, he's uber awesome.
-Cough- On with the chapter.
I think I haven't squealed so loud in my life when Gerard said he loved Frank. Gah. Now I cannot wait for the other chapter, I have to know what's going to happen!

AAAAH. Thank you for saying that about Gerard ::hail
I wanted his...teenage-ish to show.
Bob's my favorite too :tehe: I know I should've have favorites, but...:tehe: You owned points for saying that, y'know.

Thanks so much for reviewing :)

Hellboy: Yeah, Gerard *is* ashamed of Frank. :( Unfortunately. God, he's such a douchebag. :lmfao

Thanks for the review guys. I wanted to reply to all of them, but it would've been repetitive after awhile -blush-

MASSIVE THANKS. Honestly, this story would've never made it this far without the reviews. They're the fuel to this story

-new reader- I do not know why it took me so long to read all this but it did...
ITS SO GOOD
i love how its cute and funny etc all in one
I fucking looove

:tehe: I like how you made Gerard's personality, too. He's far too cynical and mean, so ... Teenage like. :shifty Yet you cannot, simply cannot hate him.
Then there's Frank who's far too innocent for his own good. And the Way brothers? Yeah, exactly how I imagine them to be, actually. :tehe:
Bob has to be one of my favorites, though, he's uber awesome.
-Cough- On with the chapter.
I think I haven't squealed so loud in my life when Gerard said he loved Frank. Gah. Now I cannot wait for the other chapter, I have to know what's going to happen!

Holy Shit.

Every time I expects it goes one way, it goes in the complete opposite direction.

I love your writing with this, the way you crave around Gerard's personality making you want hate him, but really deep down... you just can't.

And Frank, he is so freaking innocent. I adore him and how you've portrayed him in this. Making a character that is indeed so inexperienced at things that Gerard obviously is well acquainted with, is one hell of a tricky thing.

I can't wait to see what you do with the next chapter.

Gahhhhhh.
Brilliance!!!

Gerard loves Frank!Gerard loves Frank!

He better have meant that. Hopefully. =]

Frank is just adorable. I love his insecurity. But Gerard needs to stop being so ashamed of him ....

More....? =]

i was like woahh, that was unexpected.
but good,
and this comment is shitty, but at least it is a comment?
x

New reader ;] Awesome awesome story. Last chapter was kind of confusing, but maybe that's just me.

Being theevil kind and caring person that i am, i shallmurder you if you don't update give you cookies to persuade you to update soon!
-hands you a plate of cookies- ;D