The Ultimate Bet - Comments

misfitswhore:

omfg. Thanks for the reviews
This chapter is wayyyy shorter than the last ones. :shifty
I'm sick of writing this story...so...yeah.

My bad :cry:

Hey. Don't worry about it. It's fine. It happens to most people, and its happened to me countless of times.
x] Now, to the story.
:tehe: I can't get enough of them. I'm a huge fan of sarcasm. And you do it so nicely. And that's exactly how I picture Mikey to be, well, when he was a teen. I'm sure he's not like that now... Ok, wait...Gah, whatever.
I want to know what's going to happen now. Darn it.

OH.MY.GOD.

i just read this story, and it is pure genius. i dont recall the last time i have laughed that hard or been that emotionally invested in a character. im really sorry youre growing tired of writing it, I really really like it.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!

I love this story so much. It's just so . . . well written. Plus it's got an amazing story line.
I can't wait to see how everything turns out, but poor Frank. He's almost just like a pawn in everyone's game.

More? :)

It's a fabulous story and i'll be crying when it's over. But, i respect your decision and have decided not to kill you. ;]

omfg. Thanks for the reviews
This chapter is wayyyy shorter than the last ones. :shifty
I'm sick of writing this story...so...yeah.

My bad :cry:

hahahaha.

Brilliance. :) :) :)

Although . . . Damn, Gerard!! You really need to apologise to Frank properly. Do something to make it up to him.
Poor, poor Frank.
I feel so effing bad for him.

More.....? :)

Ahhh I loved the update! [:

"Who wants to play strip charades?"

"Adam, you have to have clothes to play that game."
:lmfao HAHAHHA That made my night x]]]

Also.. plagiarisstts EWWWW
mmmm

Oh. I love this so much.
xo

"Yes, how did you know? I've secretly been harboring unbrotherly feelings for the last couple of years and only when I'm drunk do I have the guts to admit to it. How did you know? Michael James Way, I know you're my brother but the feelings I have for you are not of brotherly affections...I just can't take it anymore...!"

Mikey growled in irritation as Gerard laughed, his sides aching at the bewildered expression on his brother's face. "That wasn't funny, you incestuous faggot. What the fuck do you want?"

That made me laugh so much. :XD

"No, I don't know. What the fuck are you on? Did someone slip you an estrogen pill or some shit? You know that shit shrinks your balls."

And that bit. How do you come up with these lines?! They're hilarious, no kidding.

And plagarists? Geez, I'd go all ninja on them! They need a good ass-kicking. Oh well, s*it happens. How badly did they mess up though? (I assume they did?)

I just love this story to bits! *has epic sex with it*
The dialogue is so funny, especially between the Way bros XD

PLAGIARISTS?? I feel your pain, that happened to my shitty story too >.<
This one though is not shitty. Anyway I don't get it, if people don't know how to write they should accept that.

FUCKING PLAGARISTS! *growls*
Ughhh...
btw your story IS fucking good enough to plagarize, but that's NO FUCKING EXCUSE.
Lmao.
Well, I loved that. The raw emotion was so heartfelt and gah. You know.
Love.

Bad Gee!
You've upset Frankie
:(

Has someone stolen this?!
Thats just mean :(
Personally, I love this story, I think it's brilliant, so don't say that its crap, because no-one would read or comment or subscribe if it was :D

Who's plagarizing your story?! How dare they >;o
And this is not crap. It's brilliant, it's got a unique storyline, and it's amazingly written ;] Don't ever doubt yourself.

“So…Sex-tic? How the fuck would you use that word in a sentence?”

“Would you like to come upstairs and get sexatic with me?”

“It’s like you’re asking to have sex with ticks.”

Holy fucking shit. Epic dialog. :lmfao

“I love you, Frank.”

I somehow gained trust on Gerard through this. It was kind of serious and he tried to deny it by saying that he was just
drunk. No way! It had to be true!

“I--I just...I gotta go," Gerard answered hastily as he stumbled unceremoniously to the closed door, fumbling to open it.

Okay, that was a very courageous act. (:cheese: ) I understood why Frank became confused I mean hell, he just told Frank that
he loved him and then just walks away?!

:finger:

For the next chapter, I felt so bad for Gerard. But it is what we call karma, and I think Gerard learned his lesson.
At least, he became serious with a relationship. I hope they'll be together again, they're just a cute couple.

please please please??

And.... update soon.
:cute:

*new reader* this is so good! note to self: never let MCR have no morals lol. it gets naughty =)

I kind of feel bad for Gerard.

But only a little.

Gah! Poor Frank. I wunna feed him noodles to make him happy. But this update was great. So much suspense. I hope you update soon! :)

xoxo
s.

*squeals upon seeing that this has been updated*

And what's this I hear about you wanting to delete this.... ARE YOU SERIOUS WOMAN?!? :omfg:

Do I have to tell you again what an amazing talent it takes to write something like this! The last chapter had me cringing at Gerard, and hoping more than anything that Frank would fucking slap him or do something.

Gerard is a character that you've narrated so well, yet at times you just want to run up and kick him in the balls because of all the shit he pulls.

To say that he loves him and then turn around to leave... and then him and goddamn Bert in the hallway. Frigging goddammit.

You have to continue this, because I wanna see Frankie set Gerard on his ass... and be the dominate one.

It's gonna happen, I tell you.